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A Spoiled Child

Man a terribly spoiled child resembles 

Having as his toys nature's many laws

Thoughtlessly he enjoys playing with them

Till human race into the abyss throws!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
         21 July 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/21/2017 2:30:00 PM It is great now that environmentalism is being taught in the schools so that future generations can repair what has been destroyed. Our future depends upon our children and future generations. Your poem shines a light on careless greed. : ) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 3:01:00 PM True dearest, Connie but this should have been done decades ago and even now is good I would agree but have you seen Trump pulling USA out of the Paris accord? What the school children would do? In 20-40 years when they will be in a position of power it will be too late! Look what is going on around the world! Of course I pray things to get better but they are out of hand already! Thank you my friend for your kind visit and comment!

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/21/2017 2:25:00 PM Ooh...what a harsh end; but it's truth. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 2:56:00 PM I agree the end is harsh but harsher is reality my dear,MLK! Have you seen the erratic weather behavior and the melting of the ice caps? Let us hope... Thank you so much my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2017 11:52:00 AM - Greed in all forms - is our world's new disease - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 1:56:00 PM You so right dear, Anne-Lise, greed among other things! Thank you so very much for your gracious visit and comment! Hugs

Eve Roper Date: 7/21/2017 9:45:00 AM Man one day I hope will learn, but so far no one sees the deeper picture.. Humans are too busy lining their pockets. Enjoyed reading your wisdom, Demetrios, like always. ~* Thank you for the visit on my poem.. Eve Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 1:55:00 PM What I wish dear ,Eve is that man learns before it is too late! From what I see though is that Man accelerates his doom and not the other way around! Let us hope! Thank you my friend!

Akkina Downing Date: 7/21/2017 8:22:00 AM So true. People are so greedy in their hearts they forget to step back and glance on what they are destroying. This poor world is very sad. Beautiful write Demetrios :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 1:52:00 PM Unfortunately people behave like that and we all are going to pay a heavy price dearest, Akkina! Thank you for your kind visit and comment my friend!

Maria Williams Date: 7/21/2017 7:19:00 AM How many times is Nature going to tolerate before She finally gives up on us.? Does Man deserve a second chance? He doesn't seem to be learning? Thought provoking Dearest Demetrios...Maria Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 7:23:00 AM Well, my dearest friend, Maria, history shows that Man doesn't learn from his own mistakes! God will always give the chance but Man things he would trick even God! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/21/2017 5:25:00 AM Sad but true, Demetrios, a spoiled child is the apt image:) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 7:21:00 AM Unfortunately it is true and becomes more so as time passes by dearest, Jo! Thank you so much!

Russell Sivey Date: 7/21/2017 4:14:00 AM What a brilliant piece my friend! You never cease to amaze me with your incredible, deep, intense poetry! I loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a fabulous write! Great Work!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2017 7:25:00 AM Always a pleasure to see you my "old" friend, Russell. Thank you so much for your kindness to visit and to comment!