A Spider's Web

a spider’s web holds plenty of droplets center of play Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/26/2012 10:33:00 PM

Hiya Russell, There's nothing that could be more perfect than this haiku...It makes me feel like a spider is mischievous like a cat...Wanna Play?...that's what my crazy cat would say. Enjoyed this one! gwendolen

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/26/2012 11:58:00 AM

Russell...like this KU...well done...love ya, deb...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2012 11:54:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..I always find that the webs are so beautiful when wet after a rain or wet with morn's dew..Good job..Thanks for stopping by my work about the heat and sun..It was inspired by Deb's contest but not an entry..Thanks for reminding me that it was not one of the forms that she wanted...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/26/2012 8:36:00 AM

spiders are interesting creatures..mysterious.. as your lines tell a tale luv.. they collect lots of things in their webs.. wonder if they use them all? amazing thoughts here Russell luv.. hope u r having a super day..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/26/2012 12:51:00 AM

Interesting haiku.Enjoyed it Russell.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2012 11:26:00 PM

Not crazy for spiders and their webs around my house but htis one is cute!