A Spider's View

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Author's Notes:  This particular write, entitled:  "A Spider's View" is a "Accentual Meter" type of poem that I wrote on February 18, 2015.  (I classified this poem in PoetrySoup under "Free Verse" since this type of accentual metered write is not normally listed under the PS classification pick-list.)  In this poem, I describe the view that a spider might have as he walks on his web or occasionally hangs around suspended on one of his web filaments in the corner of a ceiling.  Although this write is meant to be somewhat tongue-in-cheek, it does portray no less the intent and precision with which the spider in the poem pursues his two trapped victims and hastens their demise, and is able to eat his prey in the end.  In this same sense, I thought it was appropriate to mention Mr. Darwin along the way to harken back to the days of Biology 101 from former college days.  (Gary Bateman -- April 26, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

Categories:  allegory, death, imagery, life, metaphor, psychological, and science.

Accentual Meter Calculations and Notes:          

Accentual Meter Parameters (3 to 6 Syllables per verse)

Range: 5 x 3 = 15 (min) / 5 x 6 = 30 (max)

Total Syllables =  129 (Out of 180 Maximum Syllables Possible)

Total Words = 80

Total Verses = 30

("How Many Syllables Counter" was used for syllable confirmation for both automated and manual syllable counts and cross-check.)

  

 

A Spider’s View

Walking his web
At ceiling corner
Gazing downward
Watching and waiting
Patience absolute.

Growing hungry
Eyes focused
Two victims
Fly and Lady Bug
Trapped in web.

Sense of doom
Survival of fittest
Stronger species
Spider’s appetite
Sustenance waiting.

Scheme of life—
With Darwin smiling
A winner, two losers
Strongest wins
And strongest eats.

A Spider’s View
On a typical day
Each day similar
But different
Result—the same.

Fixed in place
Or hanging around—
Multi-legged
And multi-eyed—
An Acrobat Supreme!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
(April 26, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

*Originally written for publication in my new book on February 18, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/1/2015 2:48:00 PM
Other than their creations, I have never cared for spiders, but this sheds a whole new light on them. Beautifully done.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/1/2015 4:16:00 PM
ML, I actually don't like them either, but I did have the chance to observe one on one day hanging down from a web -- and this gave me the starter idea for this poem. Best Always, Gary
Date: 5/1/2015 2:27:00 PM
beautifully spun piece gary golden woven excellent pen wishing you both a blessed weekend pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/1/2015 4:13:00 PM
Beware of Irish Spiders Liam . . . I hear they have GREEN EYES!! Best Wishes Mate, Gary
Date: 4/27/2015 7:34:00 PM
Spider weaves its web while you weave a web of poetic words with creative zeal and deep insight my friend. Yes its on page 11 in your new book, read it to my son last night. He said, spiders eat flies and bite people. I shot back but they prefer the flies.. lol A 7 , great poem as usual....
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Gary Bateman
Date: 4/28/2015 1:56:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this gem Robert. Spiders do normally try to stay away from people, but will do the nasty sting if they feel threatened. I actually like these Accentual Meter writes. I'm amazed that PS doesn't classify them as a category. Best Wishes Robert and keep reading my book and writing your fine poetry. Talk to you soon, and I hope all is going well. Gary
Date: 4/26/2015 6:19:00 PM
The acrobatic spider gets what it needs.. This was an enjoyable read!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 4/27/2015 5:45:00 PM
DC, That's why this spider (male or female) is what I coined "An Acrobat Supreme." I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Best Always, Gary
Date: 4/26/2015 1:42:00 PM
- A work of art from both the spider and the poet - Truly a pleasure to read your poems again, dear Gary - I want to believe you have many more that "waiting" to be posted :) - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem today. .. always a pleasure :) - All the best // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 4/26/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!! Yes, I will be posting probably one poem a day for a while. I have a number of them waiting to be posted. I still have several follow-up things to do with my book although it was officially released worldwide on 9 April. I'm actually moving slowly back into things because of the very high tempo I was working at the last few months on my book. Less Stress this way. It's great to be back. Best Always, Gary
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