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12.05.2025

 

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Sixteen Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest

- A Spectacular Light Reflection -

   - World consumption is increasing in line with population growth and 
    prosperity - change light bulbs and there will be light - quote by poet


   Among the antiques
   Large aesthetic prism chandeliers
   will aim stars in your eyes
   Let us embrace this sparkling light
   A decorative object
   Each prism as a shiny mirror
   from rock crystal
   or semi-precious stones
   such as quartz and amber

   A wilderness of mirrors
   Crystal glasses, silver cutlery and decanters - multiplied
   With the prism chandelier above the table
   where words bloom in every celebration
   A timeless rhythm of togetherness
   amidst laughter and shared moments
   The ravages of time has been preserved
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Miller Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Sixteen beautiful lines indeed Anne-Lise, congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Back with congrats!
George Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Dear Anne, back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs... :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 2:54 PM
Anne-Lise, wonderfully penned, love the chandelier reference and the preservation of time of family celebrations and memories. Congratulations on your first place win. -hugs
Parker Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations Anne on your poetry in this contest, I feel like it's time for dinner, alas, I have no chandelier...Frederic
Crandall Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 10:58 AM
A pretty picture of a poem. I can see it hear the laughter and conversation under it!
Poet Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Exquisitely penned poem with wonderful layers of imagery. Congratulations on your well deserved contest top win, dear friend
George Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:04 AM
A gorgeously laid out table with crystal wares and chandeliers made of precious stones hung above with each stone working as a beautiful prism deflecting light in rainbow hues. Beautiful image and a lovely poem, dear Anne. Hugs :)
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Anne-Lise, interesting comment you make about changing the light source. We live in a planet that's full of spectacular views, and even the ones we make inside can be amazing as you point out. There's and allegory here for what's inside of us too. We just need to be able to see and appreciate it.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 4:11 PM
A pretty poem! The best thing is conversation amidst the quartz, amber, and the wilderness of mirrors! Happy Tuesday, Anne-Lise!
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:21 AM
We require less external illumination when we discover our inner light. Beautiful depiction of internal light, Anne-Lise, well done!
Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 7:17 AM
when we find the light within, we need less material shine on our own world...stunning portrayal of inner glow, anne...very nice!
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:00 PM
A lovely home...yes, what we wear, where we live and how, is all about capturing and expressing inner Light -- Anyway, life should be so, when we get it right. A universe of baubles out there for our offspring yet to acquire and explore. Someday, to realize, we had it all inside of us from the beginning.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:37 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs
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