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A Speck Aspect

A speck with every speck therein a bit of everything from everywhere combined for one relative moment Perspecktive Date: 6/29/2019 Contest: The Universe Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2019 5:50:00 PM

That's no doubt, a WINNER!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/9/2019 8:24:00 PM

:))) merci! xomo

Gary Smith

Date: 7/8/2019 12:34:00 PM

Excellent poetry Maureen, congrats. :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Gary!:) xomo

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/8/2019 2:32:00 AM

Mo great poem and wonderfulsin! Congrats!;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Brenda! Buckets of hugs, xomo ;),

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/7/2019 6:38:00 PM

First, I couldn’t get over how clever your title was - then again, Mo, you have quite a talent for that.. next, your brilliant poem just blew my mind along with that great grand finale of a last line! - But then again, you have quite a talent for mind-blowing too.. Loved it and a fav! Congratulations on your wonderful win, my lovely. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan! This was just lying in wait for a contest prompt, years mulling this one over. I think I saw you on the list too, (congratulations!) I'm struggling to keep up with all the reading I want to do. Hugs and love, Lovely, xomo! :))),

P.S. Awtry

Date: 7/7/2019 5:25:00 PM

Oh how clever OF COURSE! Well done! Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:53:00 AM

Giggles... I kinda knew this one was suspiciously stereotypically my style, thank you! xomo ;),

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2019 4:30:00 PM

Hey, there! Congrats on your win in Nina's contest, (as predicted -- though I thought it might be a mite higher). Nice going, good friend! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/7/2019 8:55:00 PM

Thank you dear! (well, the reader is left to speckulate as to my intended emotion, awe;) xomo <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2019 3:33:00 PM

that last word was such a cute way to tie it all up. Congrats for the win, Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/9/2019 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! :) xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/7/2019 2:57:00 PM

Back with my congratulations, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/9/2019 8:36:00 PM

Thank you Michelle! xomo :),

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2019 11:49:00 AM

Such a deserving high placement! Congratulations, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Kim! xomo :),

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/7/2019 10:11:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Maureen! Janice

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Janice! (I think I saw your name too on the list, I'm struggling to keep up, congratulations to you too!) xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/7/2019 9:35:00 AM

Fun and delightful poem, Maureen. Congrats on your fine win.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/8/2019 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Line! I've been sitting on this idea for years, waiting for a poem to pop ;), xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/3/2019 7:55:00 AM

Oh yes! Love it!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/3/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thank you! This took me years to write lol ;) xomo!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2019 7:13:00 AM

What a perspecktive way to look at things. love it!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/3/2019 7:19:00 AM

How do you know you don't have a galaxy in your toe? ;) xomo <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2019 6:55:00 PM

Love that ending!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/3/2019 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! It's funny how something will roll in your head for years, just waiting for the right prompt to produce a poem. x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2019 7:01:00 AM

I was going to do what Jeff did, but he stole my idea - somehow ahead of time. I know Nina is going to adore this one Maureen!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/2/2019 11:00:00 PM

Very sorry once again Carin. My spell check messed up my reply to you. I've never written such a poem as Maureen McGreavy has ever written... Even in an alternate universe. She is a poet for all times. I very much respeckt her; so I must, once again, apologize for not truly understanding your comment.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/2/2019 2:15:00 PM

That happens to me all the time... We have all written this poem before ;o) xomo!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/2/2019 12:32:00 PM

Apologies Far an but I read Maureen's poem in another directing universe before she wrote it.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/30/2019 6:14:00 PM

I suspeckt you have found multiverses never ending Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/1/2019 9:13:00 AM

...;D

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/1/2019 9:01:00 AM

...The Universe, on Orion's belt, yes, the first. I immediately imagined our own molecules as swirling galaxies...

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/30/2019 11:17:00 PM

Maureen, I just read the comments you received for this poem. Your response to Version intrigued me. We're you referring to the 1st MIB movie where an entire universe is a viable on a cat's neck; or another MIB movie where they open a locker in, I believe, a train terminal and discover an entire universe existing??? (By the way, the aliens working in the post office is completely true); after all I work there.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/30/2019 11:10:00 PM

So happy that they've been seen by more then just me Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/30/2019 9:22:00 PM

Exactly ;)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/30/2019 4:32:00 PM

I 'respeck' this 'inspecktion' immensely!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/30/2019 4:59:00 PM

Specktacular! ;D Thank you ~xomo

John Lawless

Date: 6/30/2019 7:46:00 AM

...had to get my glasses to alter my "per- speck- tive"

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/30/2019 2:32:00 PM

...um, your specs? ;D

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/30/2019 9:29:00 AM

Tee hee ;D xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2019 3:15:00 AM

I love your perspecktive - awesome ink Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/30/2019 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Jan! Hope you are well <3 HUGS! xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2019 10:56:00 PM

I haven't looked into this contest (yet), my friend, but I can just feel that Nina will really go for your unique perspective here. A winner, if I may say so. Warm wishes, gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/29/2019 11:11:00 PM

This piece prospeck since I saw Men In Black, with "The Universe" ;) I just checked in to see if there was a contest to inspire and voila! Hugs n' Love mo