A Speck Aspect

A speck
with every speck therein 
a bit of everything 
from everywhere
combined
for one
relative
moment


Perspecktive





Date: 6/29/2019

Contest: The Universe Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/9/2019 5:50:00 PM
That's no doubt, a WINNER!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/9/2019 8:24:00 PM
:))) merci! xomo
Date: 7/8/2019 12:34:00 PM
Excellent poetry Maureen, congrats. :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Gary!:) xomo
Date: 7/8/2019 2:32:00 AM
Mo great poem and wonderfulsin! Congrats!;)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Brenda! Buckets of hugs, xomo ;),
Date: 7/7/2019 6:38:00 PM
First, I couldn’t get over how clever your title was - then again, Mo, you have quite a talent for that.. next, your brilliant poem just blew my mind along with that great grand finale of a last line! - But then again, you have quite a talent for mind-blowing too.. Loved it and a fav! Congratulations on your wonderful win, my lovely. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan! This was just lying in wait for a contest prompt, years mulling this one over. I think I saw you on the list too, (congratulations!) I'm struggling to keep up with all the reading I want to do. Hugs and love, Lovely, xomo! :))),
Date: 7/7/2019 5:25:00 PM
Oh how clever OF COURSE! Well done! Congratulations!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:53:00 AM
Giggles... I kinda knew this one was suspiciously stereotypically my style, thank you! xomo ;),
Date: 7/7/2019 4:30:00 PM
Hey, there! Congrats on your win in Nina's contest, (as predicted -- though I thought it might be a mite higher). Nice going, good friend! :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/7/2019 8:55:00 PM
Thank you dear! (well, the reader is left to speckulate as to my intended emotion, awe;) xomo <3
Date: 7/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
that last word was such a cute way to tie it all up. Congrats for the win, Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/9/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! :) xomo
Date: 7/7/2019 2:57:00 PM
Back with my congratulations, Maureen!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/9/2019 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Michelle! xomo :),
Date: 7/7/2019 11:49:00 AM
Such a deserving high placement! Congratulations, Maureen!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Kim! xomo :),
Date: 7/7/2019 10:11:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Maureen! Janice
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Janice! (I think I saw your name too on the list, I'm struggling to keep up, congratulations to you too!) xomo
Date: 7/7/2019 9:35:00 AM
Fun and delightful poem, Maureen. Congrats on your fine win.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/8/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Line! I've been sitting on this idea for years, waiting for a poem to pop ;), xomo!
Date: 7/3/2019 7:55:00 AM
Oh yes! Love it!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/3/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thank you! This took me years to write lol ;) xomo!
Date: 7/3/2019 7:13:00 AM
What a perspecktive way to look at things. love it!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/3/2019 7:19:00 AM
How do you know you don't have a galaxy in your toe? ;) xomo <3
Date: 7/2/2019 6:55:00 PM
Love that ending!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/3/2019 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! It's funny how something will roll in your head for years, just waiting for the right prompt to produce a poem. x
Date: 7/2/2019 7:01:00 AM
I was going to do what Jeff did, but he stole my idea - somehow ahead of time. I know Nina is going to adore this one Maureen!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/2/2019 11:00:00 PM
Very sorry once again Carin. My spell check messed up my reply to you. I've never written such a poem as Maureen McGreavy has ever written... Even in an alternate universe. She is a poet for all times. I very much respeckt her; so I must, once again, apologize for not truly understanding your comment.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/2/2019 2:15:00 PM
That happens to me all the time... We have all written this poem before ;o) xomo!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/2/2019 12:32:00 PM
Apologies Far an but I read Maureen's poem in another directing universe before she wrote it.
Date: 6/30/2019 6:14:00 PM
I suspeckt you have found multiverses never ending Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/1/2019 9:13:00 AM
...;D
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/1/2019 9:01:00 AM
...The Universe, on Orion's belt, yes, the first. I immediately imagined our own molecules as swirling galaxies...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/30/2019 11:17:00 PM
Maureen, I just read the comments you received for this poem. Your response to Version intrigued me. We're you referring to the 1st MIB movie where an entire universe is a viable on a cat's neck; or another MIB movie where they open a locker in, I believe, a train terminal and discover an entire universe existing??? (By the way, the aliens working in the post office is completely true); after all I work there.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/30/2019 11:10:00 PM
So happy that they've been seen by more then just me Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2019 9:22:00 PM
Exactly ;)
Date: 6/30/2019 4:32:00 PM
I 'respeck' this 'inspecktion' immensely!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2019 4:59:00 PM
Specktacular! ;D Thank you ~xomo
Date: 6/30/2019 7:46:00 AM
...had to get my glasses to alter my "per- speck- tive"
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2019 2:32:00 PM
...um, your specs? ;D
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2019 9:29:00 AM
Tee hee ;D xomo!
Date: 6/30/2019 3:15:00 AM
I love your perspecktive - awesome ink Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Jan! Hope you are well <3 HUGS! xomo
Date: 6/29/2019 10:56:00 PM
I haven't looked into this contest (yet), my friend, but I can just feel that Nina will really go for your unique perspective here. A winner, if I may say so. Warm wishes, gw
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2019 11:11:00 PM
This piece prospeck since I saw Men In Black, with "The Universe" ;) I just checked in to see if there was a contest to inspire and voila! Hugs n' Love mo
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