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A Special Dance

It is finally time to talk about the wee dance A dance exhibited throughout the ages By all walks of life At all times and in all places Now children love the wee dance Legs crossed tightly, body jiggling about Left going to the toilet last minute The child often voicing “ the wee is coming out” Hearty laughter can bring on the wee dance Legs crossed tightly, body jiggling about “Stop….Im going to wet myself” often said during laughter Following through for some no doubt The wee dance does not discriminate It can happen to you or me The only requirement needed Is a bladder full of wee ….

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/30/2023 1:11:00 AM

Been there; done that...more than once Deb lolol. I hate plugging my stuff, but since you're from Australia Deb, I thought you might like my recent submission: in the outback ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2023 2:31:00 PM

I posted one today i think you may like deb called You're in trouble lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 3:06:00 PM

I will read it Jan…Debx

Pivotal Poetry

Date: 9/22/2023 1:30:00 AM

Well this is a wee bit funny, Love it. :)

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:14:00 PM

Thankyou Paula… Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/19/2023 6:07:00 PM

To pee or not to pee? That is the question. I send a wee note of thanks for this clever poem, it really flows, Deb XX

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:14:00 PM

Wee, Pee, Hehe Miss Shirley!! Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 9/19/2023 1:53:00 PM

Of course, us men can just tie two or three knots in ‘it’…. Oh…. So not ALL men then? You got me with this one, Deb…. I presumed it was going to be about a small dance… silly me!

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:24:00 PM

Two or three knots Terry…thats wishful thinking is it not hehe!! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2023 1:24:00 AM

- Wonderful ... smile :) - hugs

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Sunshine! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 12:58:00 AM

It's been ages since I heard from you. Thanks for the smile.

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:20:00 PM

Still here Victor! Thanks …lDebx

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/18/2023 7:19:00 PM

I thought it was called the pisser polka. LOL Either way, we've all got our own version. Sadly, the older we get, the more we dance. Great to read you again young lady. Hoping you are well.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2023 2:30:00 PM

ha ha ha DT I like that term xx

Deb M
Date: 9/22/2023 2:19:00 PM

How lovely to see you Daniel! You just keep popping up haha! Interesting time on P.S presently. Hope you are taking care of you! Debx