Premiere Contest WinnerA Special Birthday


June twelfth, two thousand twelve, a special date
     when all our family had gathered near
to offer tribute and to celebrate,
     your birthday, my dear husband- held so dear.

We gathered at a steak house in a park;
     some fifty friends and family were there,
with food and drink and birthday cake to mark
     your special day- revered with love and care.

You had attained age seventy and five,
     a milestone cherished by all those you knew.
A few years back, by-pass kept you alive-
     miraculous for sure- and happy you

outlived your dad, granddad, and great-grand too,
     who passed from heart disease before their time.
That special birthday brought great hope anew-
     for younger members now within their prime.

Still doing well, as you're now eight-four,
     and with God's grace, new birthday, come next year-
your eighty-fifth- we'll party even more 
     and celebrate with thankfulness and cheer! 


September 9, 2021 

Premiere Contest: A Poem To Your Spouse On His-Her Birthday
Sponsor: Funom Makama

(revision of poem posted 01/26/2016)
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Daniel Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Beautiful write fitting for your husband, Sandra, may God bless him with many more years to come! Congratulations on your trophy win:)
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Thank you very much Jo, for your visit, supportive comments, and congratulations! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Goldsmith Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful birthday tribute write. Yes, with God's grace you will have many, many more parties. Have a blessed day.............
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Paula, for stopping by again, with your always uplifting supportive comments and congratulations. I appreciate your visits and encouragement very much. Hugs, Sandra
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely and gracious poem. A big big big congratulations for winning my contest. I feel greatly honoured.
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Funom, for your great contest theme, and for my wonderful placement! I am pleased to be on your winner's list! Sandra
Agustin Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 4:44 AM
I rejoice with you for your loving tribute to your husband, and for your husband, blessed by the Lord. God bless you.
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Beata, for your lovely comments and blessings. Yes, God has blessed us both! I always appreciate your visits! Hugs, Sandra
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