Daniel Turner Poet Monorhyme

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A Southern Snow

In the dark of night, moon hidden from sight
Large snowflakes in flight and transcending white
Come morning's twilight, ice crystals ignite
They sparkle so bright as sun rays excite
The song birds unite, and softly invite
On the heart it writes , a poet's delight


   January 6 2017
Monorhyme- 6 lines 10 syllables per line
          by Daniel Turner

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Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 3:21 PM Great poem (and it's snowing here now!) Congrats Daniel! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong January 12, 2017 at 1:55 PM Your poem is truly deserving of the top win Daniel! Congratulations! I love the beautiful picture that goes with this entry too. 7 ; )

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 11, 2017 at 3:17 AM Very nice. I have experienced a few of those Southern snowfalls ... exciting! Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:01 PM A great poem with internal/ending Monorhymes, Daniel! Congratulations on your fine Podium win. Sandra

Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2017 at 4:27 PM So pretty. I like "ice crystals ignite" Congrats, Daniel!

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:10 PM I had a deep feeling that this one would place high, and so it did, Daniel. Congratulations!! // paul

Charlie Smith January 10, 2017 at 1:05 PM Well done DT, congratulations...

Heidi Sands January 10, 2017 at 8:15 AM Congratulations Daniel ! :)

Meenakshi Raina January 10, 2017 at 8:11 AM Beautiful! Congratulations on your win...

Joanna Daniel January 10, 2017 at 5:32 AM A beauty of a monorhyme, Daniel:) congratulations on your win:) a 7 and a fave:)

Janis Medders Tobechi January 9, 2017 at 11:34 PM this is lovely Daniel and very well done, a 7. Congrats

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:41 PM A delightful poem, you have crafted, my friend. Congratulations!

John Hamilton January 9, 2017 at 8:30 PM Excellent write Danny, congrats on a fine win!

Roy Pett January 8, 2017 at 5:55 AM This is an amazing monorhyme Daniel, Good luck in contest. Daniel Turner January 8, 2017 at 8:07 AM Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your kindness:)

Deborah Burch January 7, 2017 at 10:41 PM Wow!! Love this , too!! Wonderful monorhyme!! Big Hugggs. Deb:) Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 11:04 PM Thank you, Deb:)

Cheryl Hoffman January 7, 2017 at 10:31 PM Beautiful monorhyme Daniel! Good luck in the contest!~Che Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 11:03 PM Thank you, Mrs Cheryl. I love your name. I have a good friend, his wife's name is Cheryl:)

Augustus Black January 7, 2017 at 7:50 PM ah! Very sweet and delightful write. Sir. I like the every lines of this write. You are an amazing writer. 7 Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 8:41 PM Thank you, Augustus (great name:) I appreciate your kind comments and your support:)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 7, 2017 at 9:15 AM I agree w/Paul. This poem is a poet's delight, Daniel. Very creative and the flow is exquisite. Beautiful poetry, my friend. Love and more love to you and yours. Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 8:39 PM Thank you, Freddie. You are so kind:)

Paul Callus January 7, 2017 at 7:17 AM Your snow poem is also a poet's delight, Daniel/Danny! I expect to see this one flying high on the winners' list!! ~ Regards // paul Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 7:56 AM Thank you very much Paul:) Sponsors can be pretty eclectic, we'll see:)

Probir Gupta January 7, 2017 at 12:45 AM Lovely and wonderful ... Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 7:53 AM Thank you so much, Probir:)

Supraja Kannan January 7, 2017 at 12:23 AM This is a great one....You did really very well...It is 100 times better than mine... I just loved it... Good luck with the contest... A big 7... Daniel Turner January 7, 2017 at 7:53 AM Thank you, Supraja. I thought your poem was lovely:)

Doug Vinson January 6, 2017 at 8:46 PM Daniel, soft and bright as that southern snow - mighty glad here that your words will continue on, unlike that snow. Doug Vinson January 6, 2017 at 11:20 PM Deal, Danny. : ) And thanks for not calling me 'Douglas,' because that brings back childhood memories of when the long form is used in anger, i.e. "Douglas, get your butt in this house right now!" Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 8:49 PM Thank you, Doug. Please call me Danny:)

Akkina Downing January 6, 2017 at 8:23 PM And you can call me Kina :) Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 8:26 PM Love it:)

Akkina Downing January 6, 2017 at 8:20 PM Ok Danny ;) Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 8:22 PM Ok Akkina:):)

Akkina Downing January 6, 2017 at 7:38 PM I'd picked you already for the winner for this one is PERFECTLY beautiful :) Good luck and all the very best Mr. Turner Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 7:45 PM Oh, so now it's Mr. Lol Just Danny or DT is fine:) Thank you, Akkina:):)

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