A Souper New Year! (Co-Written With James Fraser)

In early spring I found you on Poetry Soup
A haven where wordsmiths congregate to recoup
Some sense of sanity in a world filled with grief
Your friendship, dear Highlander, has brought much relief

     Being new to writing, I decided to try
     So I joined the Soup, and a name caught my eye
     Carolyn Devonshire, was the name in question
     Her guidance has taken me to a different dimension

Who'd know the Soup would bring a Scottish writing mate
It was our destiny; now I believe in fate
A braveheart's pen paints history and mystery
Erasing fear and lifting me from misery

     No sooner had I arrived beautiful comments were received
     My writing was enjoyed and I now started to believe
     An American lady has become a soul mate and teacher
     Her words of kindness enhanced my words to be featured

So much loss I'd incurred just before we met here
Never had I dreamed of finding a comrade so dear
He reached across the sea and took me by the hand
And together we've escaped to fantasy lands

     Before the Soup, I posted somewhere else
     If you were not one of them you were left on the shelf
     But the Soup's beach babe led me by the pen
     I was absorbed in her circle right there and then 
 
James and I propose a toast to many Soup friends
Whose talents are displayed here again and again
Too many great writers to mention each one's name
A new year comes as you enter our Hall of Fame


Happy New Year from James and me to all of the Poetry Soup Family!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 1/9/2010 9:29:00 AM
WOW, thats nice, i felt the love,
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:29:00 PM
Indeed happy new year to you and James, Carolyn. Very nice work of the pen you both produced here. Thanks for sharing. you have soupmail. Love and happiness, Caroline.
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Date: 1/3/2010 1:32:00 PM
Well right back atcha, Carolyn ... wonderful write here and tomorrow (1/4) is your new Soup friends birthday ... smile ... Hope you had a wonderful holiday and 2010 is a GREAT year for you and yours !!
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Date: 12/30/2009 2:48:00 PM
Interesting combo. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/30/2009 1:33:00 PM
Happy New Year Maybe it was fate which brought us all to Poetry Soup! I am going to a reading tonight at the Green Pavilion Restaurant in Brooklyn New York. Thanks for the encouraging poem and your support. Maybe one day I will see you at the "Green" This reading has been going on for about 20 years!
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Date: 12/30/2009 6:43:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to all the "Soupers" Thanks for sharing and writing! You and I are one of the oh soooo many gifted writers in this community! Blessings for 2010! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 12/24/2009 10:46:00 PM
a tremendous duo of the written word,,so richly intertwined poetically,,,Thank you both for reading an commenting upon my words and for the single and combined words that come from both o you,,,Merry Christmas and a Happy new year,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:58:00 AM
And A Joyous New Year to the two of you as well. Superbly written co-write....You both are wonderful writers and I do so enjoy reading your writes! Keep on writing and let the pen flow where it may! Thanks so much for sharing. Many thanks too for taking the time to read my works and your kind comments are deeply appreciated! Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/20/2009 4:13:00 AM
Happy New Year to two of my dearest friends here..I thank God for having you in my life.. beautiful poem,going to my favz.Charma:)
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:15:00 PM
Excellent collaboration from the two finest poets on the Soup... Bravo to both of u... wonderful way to start the New Year off right... excellent ... thankxxx also for your comments on my poetry which encourage me to continue on this site and contribute more in spite of criticism.. appreciate your support always... good friend .... blessings... luv... and your kindness to one with your tribute is commendable to your warm spirit.. wonderful to uplift another poet... blessings... luv..
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:08:00 PM
Hey what a beautiful poem you have come together to write!Wordsmiths of the heart indeed. Thanks for sharing this and your uplifting toast! Cheers! Thank you both for your encouraging comments. -Robert
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Date: 12/19/2009 1:36:00 PM
Very good, I know I am sure happy to be here at Poetry Soup, may next year be even better..thanks om Fess Up..and I agree with what you say...no matter where on the path of life on ends up...rich, poor, good or bad...come Judgment Day..all have to fess up and come clean...MERRY CHRISTMAS Danny
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:22:00 AM
Hands across the sea, eh? Love ya both. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:28:00 PM
Carolyn, James...your pens go together so nicely..Im enjoying seeing each new one. The best of the holiday season to you both. BG
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:52:00 PM
Good job you two ringing in the new year. Yes the many here on soup are outstanding examples of good hearted people, I also have enjoyed my time here. Much wish of accomplishment toward you both in this coming year. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:50:00 PM
I love your poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:47:00 PM
This, dear Carolyn and James, is a most beautiful new year wish and statement of friendship. You both inspire and support many writers on our wonderful "Poetry Soup." Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, too. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:31:00 PM
A delightful combination you two peas in a pod make. Perhaps an ocean apart...however, pen to pen you are united!! Thank you for the wonderful poetry!~ love, Carrie
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Date: 12/18/2009 11:58:00 AM
merry christmas and happy new year. john h loving iii
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:55:00 AM
You two are the Dynamic Duo, always a pleasure to read your combined work. God Bless and may you both have a truly wonderful and healthy New Year. Ron
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:33:00 AM
Happy New Years to you Both from Mary , Josh and myself... This was a wonderful co-write. You both did a magnificent job...Bravo... Hey James Got any Glenfiddich ? Just askin...lol....Taz
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration, Carolyn and James. Thank you for all your kindness since I've been back in the Soup! May you have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year filled with blessings and every good thing you wish for yourselves! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/18/2009 9:11:00 AM
Carolyn, i thoroughly enjoyed this co-write. I am looking forward to our writes next year. There are so many wonderful poets on this Souper site, along with my beach babe/teacher. I would like to wish you all a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, and i hope that 2010 is kind to you all >> James
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Date: 12/18/2009 9:02:00 AM
Wow! This is such a beautiful duet, the making of a beautiful song!! What a writing pair the two of you make, may your pens never run dry! Happy New Year to you both, can't wait to read what the two of you come up with in 2010!!! I know it'll be great....Carolyn you have soup mail hun. Love Light Patty
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