Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Quatrain

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- A Soul Thoughts In a Lonely Night -

When the nights are dark and long
Held on a slim lunar cradle rocking back and forth 
Sleep would be merciful unto eyes suffering fate 
As the lids fall under inside emotions gates

To finally make a break free
Climbing the highest mountain peaks 
Some dreams of angels carry the soul away
Into a world where butter melts into golden visions 

Be with me when the night is dark and quiet
Waltzing  silver shadows eloping stars shooting trails 
A delicious feeling soars on the winds above the earth
Breathless fire burning warm spirit intoxicating timeless

Flowing into a universe with song softly dancing joy
Happiness warmly glows distant horizons 
This dark night will soon end 
As the teardrops greet a new day bathing angels in light 









A Collaborated Poem 15.01.2016
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)
(unrhymed quatrain)

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Angeline Haikutwinkle January 22, 2017 at 9:24 AM I can see Liam's influences here ;) wonderful combination of choice of words, coupled with enchanting imagery....

Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 7:57 AM Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2016 at 8:35 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Funom - Best wishes for a beautiful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 22, 2016 at 10:22 AM Beautiful you two. Makes you get that warm fuzzy feeling as you drift in the night. Love it. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 22, 2016 at 11:41 AM - Many thanks for your visit, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein January 20, 2016 at 7:18 PM This is totally capturing dear , this is another remarkable collaboration , I salute you both for this breath taking piece , hugs / / :) dalia Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2016 at 2:43 PM - Thank you for the lovely comments, Dalia - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sarita Milliner January 20, 2016 at 12:05 PM Your words paint a beautiful picture of you soul! Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2016 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for your visit, Sarita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus January 18, 2016 at 9:33 AM Another delightful collaboration, Anne Lise & Liam! You two travel through the night, keeping each other company, till dawn arrives. #7 Well done! ~ Regards // paul Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2016 at 9:48 AM - Many thanks for the 7 and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery January 16, 2016 at 1:34 PM beautiful words to soothe the soul. Enjoyed much Anne Lise. Take care, Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2016 at 1:50 PM - Thanks for the beautiful comments on our poems, Vincent - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2016 at 11:59 AM have a happy moment, anne!... looking forward to your new masterpiece.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2016 at 12:09 PM - Best wishes for a wonderful day, Nette :) - hugs from your friend in winter Norway :))

Len Gasun January 16, 2016 at 12:26 AM This is absolutely a spectacular collaboration in a very beautiful form my very dear Anne! I love every line and the last line is great! Hats off to both of you! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and wonderful weekend! love lots and big hug, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2016 at 12:07 PM - Dear friend Leonora, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez January 15, 2016 at 8:19 PM You bring comfort and happiness where it is needed, Anne and Liam. Congrats on another lovely collab. Enjoy a great weekend! hugs to you both! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2016 at 12:05 PM Thank you very much, Kim :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven January 15, 2016 at 7:05 PM Hi Anne-Lise, i see the magic still comes from the pens of two most talented poets. You both let your hearts sing and the magic is born right there. You both excell in your collaborations. May your hearts ever sing and the gold of your pens ever run. A definite seven Anne-Lise. Hugs....Vladislav. X Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2016 at 12:03 PM - To share thoughts and words with Liam is a pleasure - Thank you appreciated our writing Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 15, 2016 at 10:30 AM When started reading the poem, I understood right away it was a collaboration of you and Liam, dear Anne-Lise! You are made for each other as both contribute to the beauty of the poem you create! A seven to each! Bravo! Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 12:42 PM - Liam and me share the words of hearts, it makes me happy :) .... and it makes me happy to share it with you, dear friend Demetrios - Thank you very much - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2016 at 9:57 AM the warmth of hope makes this collab such a delightful read... best to you anne and liam... huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 12:43 PM - Thanks, glad you enjoy it Nette :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman January 15, 2016 at 9:26 AM you've captured a dream in words....not easy to do. excellent write from the both of you. Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 9:47 AM - Thank you very much, glad you enjoy it Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie January 15, 2016 at 8:38 AM the lonely night, to some causes fright but the truth of this plight is it offers inspiring insight to keep us in the fight to elevate our minds to new heights with the art that we write in an effort to shed light with all the heart's might just to confirm what is right....wonderful as always you two....;) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 9:03 AM - Thanks, glad you enjoy it Eric - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha January 15, 2016 at 7:55 AM A perfect collaboration poem. Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 8:15 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Miraj :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2016 at 7:25 AM also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a blessed week

Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2016 at 7:24 AM your words mixed golden ink a pleasure sharing pens with you anne lise wishing you a beautiful weekend pal Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 8:14 AM - Many thanks dear friend - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 15, 2016 at 6:32 AM Beautiful collaboration...enjoyed Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 6:51 AM - Joseph, many thanks for the lovely comments - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:58 AM this is what comes when two excellent poet's collaborate, wow! so lovely, well written...you've both done a nice work Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 6:50 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, W.S. - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 15, 2016 at 5:06 AM Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.Just awesome!A true golden gem!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very sweet and beautiful!:))Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2016 at 6:49 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Dorian - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)