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A Song of Fall

bright leaves are twirling as wind dances through the woods . . . a thrush is trilling

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2023 8:20:00 AM
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Gorgeous!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 2:28:00 PM
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I don't believe we have a species of birds here that are called thrush but I have heard of them. I will have to look their call to see what they sound like. Thanks for sharing this one with us and making me think once of again of cooler days of fall. Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/19/2023 9:01:00 PM
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i think they are only on the east coast: Wood thrush
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/15/2023 5:00:00 PM
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Sounds sweet to my ears, Andrea. A fine Haiku. Hugs, Bill
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/15/2023 2:24:00 PM
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Ah nice you are talking about early fall, the prettier part of fall. Great Haiku.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2023 12:29:00 PM
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Andrea, though I love summer most, your Autumn haiku perfectly captures the beauty of fall and conjures such wonderful images!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 7/15/2023 7:04:00 AM
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Love that onomatopoeia used here, brilliant, trilling is thrilling, Andrea:)
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Jack Horne
Date: 7/15/2023 6:32:00 AM
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awww, love this - beautiful
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/15/2023 5:09:00 AM
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Every line speaks of autumn--lovely images, Andrea.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/15/2023 2:14:00 AM
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so beautiful haiku, i can imagine the scene, thanks
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Andrew John
Date: 7/15/2023 1:56:00 AM
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I love haikus and (similar) senryus, Andrea, and love this. It takes some effort to get three short lines working so well toether.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2023 12:48:00 AM
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gorgeous gorgeous imagery - a perfect haiku Andrea! hugs Jan xx
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/15/2023 12:40:00 AM
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Hello Andrea.., You're up late tonight. Writing a thrush in fall beautifully. -Richard
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