A Song of Fall

bright leaves are twirling
as wind dances through the woods . . .
a thrush is trilling

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Date: 7/26/2023 8:20:00 AM
Gorgeous!
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Date: 7/16/2023 2:28:00 PM
I don't believe we have a species of birds here that are called thrush but I have heard of them. I will have to look their call to see what they sound like. Thanks for sharing this one with us and making me think once of again of cooler days of fall. Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/19/2023 9:01:00 PM
i think they are only on the east coast: Wood thrush
Date: 7/15/2023 5:00:00 PM
Sounds sweet to my ears, Andrea. A fine Haiku. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/15/2023 2:24:00 PM
Ah nice you are talking about early fall, the prettier part of fall. Great Haiku.
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Date: 7/15/2023 12:29:00 PM
Andrea, though I love summer most, your Autumn haiku perfectly captures the beauty of fall and conjures such wonderful images!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 7/15/2023 7:04:00 AM
Love that onomatopoeia used here, brilliant, trilling is thrilling, Andrea:)
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Date: 7/15/2023 6:32:00 AM
awww, love this - beautiful
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Date: 7/15/2023 5:09:00 AM
Every line speaks of autumn--lovely images, Andrea.
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Date: 7/15/2023 2:14:00 AM
so beautiful haiku, i can imagine the scene, thanks
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Date: 7/15/2023 1:56:00 AM
I love haikus and (similar) senryus, Andrea, and love this. It takes some effort to get three short lines working so well toether.
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Date: 7/15/2023 12:48:00 AM
gorgeous gorgeous imagery - a perfect haiku Andrea! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2023 12:40:00 AM
Hello Andrea.., You're up late tonight. Writing a thrush in fall beautifully. -Richard
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