A Song For Juliet

When last they kissed, and passion's lease
bloomed brief and sweet, Sir Shakespeare's quill 
would set in motion a deathly chill.
For Juliet, he could not appease
to win her smile and would not release 
a tranquil tale...but did reveal
this tragic poem, where lovers fell
and would break our hearts with spellbound grief.

Behold, your eyes will weep for her,
and empty arms will flail, for him
Young lovers swept away, in love
Misguided youth that we hold dear
and through the years we pray for them,
as songs are sung by mourning doves

...
 
Their love, was a fever, sorely sought
Of passion's quest, she would requite
to bridge the wage of family strife
But, delusion,  rides deceitful plots
To think him dead, she had no doubt
Despaired, beyond her wildest thought
Disquiet of the heart cried out
And death, would dim the stars that night

Their song still lives, as stories will
Upon two graves, we linger here 
Such love divine, is ours to keep
A sonnet binds them, ever still...
A love that cannot be compared
While swollen hearts, with anguish, weep


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2/11/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/20/2014 11:00:00 AM
Musical, effortless flow of words, and an excellent job with the form. Thanks for supporting my contest, Carrie; though I do hope to do better for you next time.
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Date: 2/18/2014 3:42:00 PM
this sings to me Nette so poignant congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/18/2014 9:13:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2014 6:11:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, carrie
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Date: 2/14/2014 8:58:00 AM
excellent Carrie gl in contest hugs
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Date: 2/12/2014 3:09:00 PM
Great way to tell the story about the picture..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today.Sara
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Date: 2/11/2014 11:37:00 PM
Would you say it is the most famous? I think it would be!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 11:37:00 PM
YOu went all out, Carrie. TWO Italian sonnets!!! And you really did capture the essence of that tragic quality of Shakespeare most famous play!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:47:00 PM
what a beautiful re-telling you have written here Carrie! ...just lovely...luv,Deb
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