A Solace In Solitude - Loneliness Contest

Like the moving clouds my life runs,
Not knowing when to stop, saturate and shower,
Carrying the vapours of worry my heart weighs heavy,
Crossing the peak I saturate and cry,
Sometimes I squall, sometimes I bawl,
At times I weep and at times I wail,
The joy of colours are slowly dwindling,
I turn black or white,
I see my life waning in vain,
I was wont to rise at dawn, 
My mornings turned mournings,
Tears of grief brushes my cheeks,
Lamentation has become my daily passion,
I like to cry and this is my hobby,
The two impostors -  happiness and joy
I  never met them so far
To smile or laugh, this has become   
The most difficult task.
No shelter to stay,
No shoulders to lay,
A sense of loneliness in the crowd,
Desolation always stands before me,
I see my reflection but there is none,
Even my shadow never follows me,
Unaccompanied and deserted,
Isolated from my own species,
Yet I danced with abandoned enthusiasm,  
My bed, my companion,
Where I cuddle for warmth,
It makes my dreams come true,
By making me more dream and accrue
My pillow my spouse,
The hugs of lust and kisses of romance,
With all love bites and chews,
It remains the same even if I squeeze,
The scented breeze holds up patiently,
When the window panes thrown open,
It rushes to tell me its stories of faux pas,
In fiasco and pain I listen to him again,
We share are exasperation and worries,
My gentle friend slides my tears away,
The park benches where I take a nap,
Reminds me my mother’s lap,
It calls me with love and care 
And bears me with its arms as chair,
The tall maples around me,
With beautiful red pentamerous raceme
It composes melodies of all times
And makes an concert with wind chimes,
With all these little pleasures,
All alone in this world,
With no one falling in my eyes,
I live a life`
And this I call a solace in solitude.

22 July, 2016
Loneliness Poetry contest

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Date: 7/24/2016 5:14:00 PM
Madhupriya, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/25/2016 1:25:00 AM
Thank you sandra:)
Date: 7/24/2016 10:27:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Madhupriya! ~karam~
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/24/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Karam:)
Date: 7/24/2016 9:34:00 AM
Congratulation Madhupryia to win. I appreciate your emotion. Love.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/24/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/23/2016 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations Madhupriya on the placement of the contest
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/24/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Nayda:)
Date: 7/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem in contest. Good luck in the contest. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/24/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you sir:)
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thank you sir:)
Date: 7/23/2016 8:48:00 AM
The park bench throws whole new light on this. Great words. Best of luck in the contest.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/24/2016 4:53:00 AM
Thank you scott:)
Date: 7/22/2016 6:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/23/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank you sara:)
Date: 7/22/2016 5:53:00 AM
Probing into once soul and examining one's self is an act of understanding the human psyche! A deep poem excellently written dear, Madhupriya. A seven!
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
thank you sir for your lovely comments;)
Date: 7/22/2016 5:10:00 AM
Picturesque freedom ... a unique solo life ... and the dear comfort ... What else a poem needs? ... no need for gl perhaps ...
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/22/2016 8:01:00 AM
thank you sir for sparing your time ;)
Date: 7/22/2016 4:05:00 AM
Nicely done.... Good luck in the contest Madhupriya....
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:01:00 AM
thank you supraja
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