A Softer Silk She Came

A softer silk she came,

   with tresses as a willow

   weeps long to seeking love;

Her air as stars and moons,

   of countenance opulent,

   l'amour and debonair;

Whose eyes seek the hidden bloom....

   (such goddess of slender strides

   and aerie chimes)

She hath not heard of death ----

   knows it not,

   and only life knows her,

   for a softer silk she came


Endeared she whose lips speak as rushing waters

   and mellow cinnamon climes,

   whose whisper furled Apollo 

   and all the rhyme he felled;

Whose ear heard never a temptress distant knell,

   nor some grim hades from some bitter-wrought hell,

   for 'o what a chartered hope,

   the lovely of her spell!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/11/2014 9:24:00 AM
So soft endearing and beautiful this is.Your poems have a way of getting deep, to the reader: )
Login to Reply
Date: 7/7/2014 4:13:00 PM
This is beautiful, descriptive and romantic. Looking forward to falling under her spell!7 rating. Well done, Keith! // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2014 9:12:00 PM
Wow love this work man, great job I still say you are way above my stuff guy. It's a very moving work, very inspirational and the imagery is far and above, bravo again. Thank you for your comment on my small attempt on a work, in commparsion to yours, I have been working on a book but after reading yours I have to be honest I think I'll wait awhile. thanks again cheri
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2014 10:50:00 PM
Another super write my friend... Your pen flows with a gift from Romance's magic spell.. BBBBravo!!!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 5:53:00 PM
The delicacy of your expression does mesmerize....
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 4:24:00 PM
Beautifully worded! I find this poem so magical ^^ - All the Best Doris!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 4:15:00 PM
Magical and mystical! Thanks for your kind words regarding my poetry. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 3:26:00 PM
Enchanting write that leaves one wanting to know more of this wonder of a woman
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 2:28:00 PM
Wow...this is so lovely...enjoyed...Noelle
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2014 2:05:00 PM
this is mind-bendingly worded, keith! .. i am reminded of things innocent!,,great write!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter