Home » Poems » Eileen Manassian » A Soft Spot

Eileen Manassian | + Follow Poet |

A Soft Spot

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eileen Manassian.

My heart is old in love years the flesh not as supple There has been a hardening brought on by years of toil years of care a heartache or two or maybe more than a few have made it quite callous... My heart is old in love years and yet... there is a soft spot in my heart a tender place where the flesh is young and strong beating along swathed in oxygenated flow not toughened by age or hardened by rage... It is soft It is warm It is moist and fresh virbrant and alive full of love... Yes, there is a soft spot in my heart for.....you Eileen Manassian Ghali

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Red Fiery

Date: 6/3/2016 2:39:00 AM

You are a wonderful person and a talented Poetes,,,!! Your heart will always beat with warm poetry as you have a vibrant imagination ...I am impressed my dear with this soft spot...~Red A100/100...and a hug~

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/3/2016 1:42:00 AM

Beautifully written. I love these endearing poems you write. Always so heartfelt and sweet!(: Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2016 8:17:00 PM

You need to put your voice with this one. I am struggling to do a new recording now that I am home and my student is not here to help me!!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/1/2016 6:59:00 PM

Such lovely sweet piece Eileen, really makes such nice read with such soft touch, blessings, Gordon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2016 1:50:00 PM

you warm my heart with this affectionate write; soo you, eileen... enticed!..huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thank you, dear... :) all we need is a little tenderness....

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/1/2016 9:10:00 AM

aww... so sweet. We often lose that soft spot from wear and tear, so glad you still have it there. :) hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:56:00 PM

I do.....I fight to keep it...some people are worth it. Thanks for the visit dear....hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 AM

Better rush before Richard or Tim fill the spot! Haha Truly delightfully tender writing dear, Eileen! Please keep a spot for me! A seven

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:57:00 PM

Mr dear esteemed poet.....I'm a big girl...with a big heart. Your place is assured. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 6/1/2016 6:37:00 AM

Very lovely Eileen. I do believe many parts of the heart remain young forever.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:57:00 PM

Yes....it's true. I'm thankful for that. Thanks for your visit....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/1/2016 6:26:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again Eileen. No one would ever think of you as hard hearted!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:58:00 PM

It's is the kindness of your heart that allows you to see me in this light. For that....I'm grateful. Hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/1/2016 4:30:00 AM

Lovely write all can relate to:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Jo. Much appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2016 6:12:00 PM

oh wow, this is so beautiful, truly one of your best free verse, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 3:00:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Heartwarming post....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2016 1:47:00 PM

- Lovely written, dear Eileen - (I like when you read to me ..... seen all four :) - Best wishes and large hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2016 3:02:00 PM

Sunshine.....bless you...for bringing light and love. You warm my heart. Hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2016 1:07:00 PM

Very nice Eileen, must be for Paul, or you spelled callous wrong, anyway I always enjoy your writing this was very tender.Did you mean vibrant and alive? Well done!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 11:54:00 PM

Thank you for the corrections, John. :) It's much appreciated. I welcome an observant eye. Paul and his family do have a soft spot in my heart. They were so gracious to me in Malta. Paul and I have collaborated many times, but.....that was a typographical error. This is actually a repost of a poem I wrote some time ago...My muse is on holiday so I thought I would repost an older poem...You can check the original out here: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soft_spot_504338.. I do believe this was before Paul's time....Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs