Constance La France Poet Tetractys

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A Soft Murmur

I 
began
amongst rocks
a soft murmur
chattering until I met the river



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December 6, 2015

Tetractys
Theme - a stream
Written by Broken Wings

For the contest, Language of Water 
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

First Place

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D.W. Rodgers December 20, 2015 at 3:42 PM Congrats on you rwin Constance La France December 20, 2015 at 4:56 PM Dave, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Skat A December 14, 2015 at 9:31 PM BROKEN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT** Constance La France December 15, 2015 at 4:09 AM Thank you Skat

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2015 at 3:18 PM this is FANTASTIC, Constance. A very well deserved win. Congratulations. Constance La France December 11, 2015 at 3:30 PM Andrea, thanks for the congrats, I loved writing in this form, it was so inspiring to me ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 8:03 AM Congratulations on your first place on the contest. Constance La France December 11, 2015 at 2:56 PM Nayda thanks for the visit and the congratulations ~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 10, 2015 at 10:42 PM Congrats on ur wonderful write n first place win broken! Constance La France December 11, 2015 at 4:43 AM Upma, thanks so much for the congrats ~

Eve Roper December 10, 2015 at 9:44 PM Back to congratulate you on your win! Constance La France December 11, 2015 at 4:44 AM Eve, thank you for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight December 10, 2015 at 1:49 PM Lovely, Broken Wings, I can feel the flow with your words. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Hugs, Sandra Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 4:05 PM Sandra, thanks for the congratulations, I am over the moon happy with first place

CayCay Godwin December 10, 2015 at 10:54 AM I love this! CayCay Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 4:05 PM Thank you so much CayCay

Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 9:53 AM What a lovely image, Constance! It's a pity that when the river is reached the chattering gets drowned in roaring sound!:) #7 Congrats on this high flying win! // paul Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 4:07 PM Paul thanks for the congrats, I was truly inspired with this write

Beautiful Scars December 10, 2015 at 9:39 AM Congrats on your win Broken Wings well deserved !!- *smiles* Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 4:08 PM Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles

John Hamilton December 10, 2015 at 9:16 AM Nice personification, well deserved first place! Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 4:09 PM John Thanks so much for the congratulations and the visit

Sarita Milliner December 10, 2015 at 7:23 AM Awesome! Well deserved win! Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 8:12 AM Sarita, I love the word awesome, thanks for visiting ~

Michael Tor December 10, 2015 at 6:14 AM A gradual buildup of a roaring river. Excellent win!! Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 6:26 AM Michael, so happy you like my poem, appreciate your comment so much ~

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2015 at 3:43 AM amazing imagery, constance... sweet , high congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 6:27 AM Nette, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~

Jan Allison December 10, 2015 at 2:31 AM wow! many congrats on your top spot I can see why Nette loved this one:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France December 10, 2015 at 6:28 AM Jan, thanks for the congrats, it was a lovely form to write in, I was just feeling it !!

James Inman December 7, 2015 at 9:06 PM Very nice write BW. Descriptive use of personification. Constance La France December 7, 2015 at 9:43 PM Thanks so much James

Manu Singh Tanwar December 7, 2015 at 2:03 PM nice melody wings all the best for contest. Constance La France December 7, 2015 at 3:07 PM Manu, thanks so much for the visit and the support, appreciate !

Balveen Cheema December 7, 2015 at 12:43 PM How melodious, Wings! Good luck Constance La France December 7, 2015 at 3:08 PM Balveen, thank you for the ever support ~

Eve Roper December 7, 2015 at 12:31 AM Lovely write ,Broken Wing, good luck in the contest! Constance La France December 7, 2015 at 7:57 AM Eve thanks for the lovely and the support~