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A Snowman's Hold

snowman three meters high an inelegant formation of grizzled snow packed in lumps needing refinement stubby tree-branch arms glutching fastened balloons, blue and yellow bobbing in the wet licks of wind snowman towering, gently twisted desperate grit to thwart a winter's thaw as blue and yellow balloons bounce near an icy chest like a slow tempo beat of heart plundered sense of capture quirky resilient balloons scripted bits of childhood charm not yet swept aside by tempest nearby snatched away by breezes one red balloon traces the street gutter like a beggar foraging returnable cans red balloon smitten with blotches of mud deflating in the mercenary chill its gentle sway like a cheeky concept of self unrestrained in the vagrancy of night Poem composed February 7, 2023

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Date: 4/6/2023 10:27:00 AM
A Snowman can tell many stories. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day.............
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/6/2023 12:39:00 PM
So true Paula. The snowman is a silent observer of activity that swirls about. Thank you for leaving a comment on my posting. Cheers Brian
Date: 2/26/2023 5:03:00 AM
I like this one. I was wondering if the yellow and blue balloons had anything to do with support for Ukraine but then the red balloon comes into the picture. Maybe it means the wounded, or dead of both Ukraine and Russia. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a winner in the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/26/2023 8:18:00 AM
Hi Sara, you've got it indeed. My neighbor built a huge snowman + tied the Ukrainian colored balloons to his stick arms. My muse took over from there. Be well + thanks very much for the stop by. Cheers Brian
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2023 5:04:00 AM
Oh, I have got it now. Russia is known as Red. Sara
Date: 2/23/2023 12:25:00 PM
Your poetry is really well-written, Brian. Another out-standing poem with spot-on imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Charlie
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/23/2023 12:46:00 PM
Greetings Charles, my appreciation for your affirmative view of my snowman-balloon poem. A neighbor constructed this giant snowman complete with balloons. A good image to work from. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 2/19/2023 10:12:00 PM
There is so much to admire here Brian. Another superb write with such great imagery. The balloons and their colours add another dimension to your work. A brilliant use of metaphors. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/20/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for your appraisal. The over sized snowman, like Ukraine in winter, fights for its survival. Yellow + blue balloons beat in a defiance of chippy wind. Perhaps the metaphorical intention wasn't as successful as I hoped, if readers slip by meaning. My appreciation for your valued support. Be well. Brian
Date: 2/8/2023 8:49:00 AM
Your strong imagery really brings this snowman to life! ",,, one red balloon traces the street gutter like a beggar foraging returnable cans" I love this image! Great writing, Brian!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2023 12:33:00 PM
Hi Thomas, My appreciation for your assessment of my poem. The color of the balloons is significant with the yellow + blue being the colors of the Ukrainian flag. Thank you for stopping by + leaving an affirmative note.. Cheers Brian

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