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A Snowman Knocking On My Window Pane

A snowman knocking on my window pane,
                       his breath puffing white in the chilly frigid air.
                   Five feet tall, three large snowballs of different sizes,
             with the biggest at the bottom and the smallest for his head. 
                    A carrot for his nose, coal for his eyes and mouth, 
                          and a corncob pipe with a great big smile.  
                                     Tree branches for his arms 
                   with an old, crooked, large black top hat on his head 
                                   and a red scarf around its neck.

                                                Tap, Tap, Tap,
                                    “Would you come out and play,
                                        its cold and no one’s out. 
                                     Would you come out and play.” 
                 With half frozen tears trickling down his white face, he said. 
               “I can show you a land of enchantment that is amazingly fun. 
                We can go to a frozen lake where we can put on our skates 
             and skate around the frozen ice and Arabesque or do a Twizzle. 
            Or make a hole in the ice and go ice-fishing with a strong branch,
                  string, and safety-pin and catch yellow perch or walleye. 
                                            When we’re all done, 
           we can ride a sled with bells and a team of Santa Clause’s reindeer 
                       fly around the shimmering snow covered rooftops 
             and see what Jack Frost has done to this magical wonderland.”

                                               Tap,Tap,Tap,
                                  “Would you come out and play.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 1:37 AM
It sure would make for a fun-filled day! I really enjoyed this wonderful, whimsical poem! Great writing, Eve! :)
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Kelly, thank you for reading my poem,I am glad you liked it. :) blessings to you and Happy Thanksgiving
Gifford Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Well Eve, I just have one question. Did you go out and play with your snowman? I hope you bundled up, or you will be the snowwoman tapping at someone else's window saying come out and play with me.
Roper Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Darlene, if I was a child, I would have bundled up and sneak out to play, but at 63 my bones wouldn't be able to take it. I use to hate doing playground duty when it rained or snowed. Thank you :) hugs eve
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 7:04 AM
It reads like the dream that you intended. A most enjoyable read, excellent work.
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Scott, for your compliment. Blessing to you :) eve
Hamilton Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:29 PM
delightful Eve a wonderful write hugs
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, Shadow, for your compliment. Blessing to you :) eve
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:57 AM
so dreamy and well told, dear eve..much enjoyed!.. huggs
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Nette, thank you so much for the compliment. :) hugs eve
Vaso Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Wonderful and uplifting, a take to be read to the children!
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Arthur, thank you for stopping by and your compliment, always welcome. :) hugs eve
Carroll Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Lovely winter write Eve!
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Ken, thank you for visit and your compliment, always welcome. :) hugs eve
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Such a delightful story my dear friend Eve.Snowmen are so pretty to watch, such a pity that can build one here in Florida. lol A 7 for me! God bless you! :) love and hugs! xxx D.
Callus Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Now...how could anyone refuse such a heartfelt plea!! I'm sure you made him happy!:) well done! // paul
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Hello Paul, the outcome was a happy one, thank you for the compliment. :) hugs eve
Smith Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Wonderful story Eve...I love playing in the snow with my kids...hugs Tim
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Tim; I use to have a lot of fun with my boys going up to the mountains and play. :) hugs eve
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 3:38 PM
- So sweet story/poem Eve.... - Lovely written - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :) eve
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:19 PM
simply charming Eve! hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, Jan, winter is here and it's cold had to write something that was making me cold. hugs :) eve
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