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A Snowflake Kisses

a snowflake kisses my warm cheek and melts away-- others make me cold

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2012 8:34:00 AM

Hello, I'm here to taste the snowflakes again... this haiku really speaks for it's self... xox..pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 10:53:00 PM

JACK;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/3/2011 7:02:00 PM

Congratulations Jack. A fragile airy Haiku. well done...Margaret

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/3/2011 11:55:00 AM

oh shucks! well what a sweet snowflake that must've been! Really liked this, Jack :) and thank you for dropping by my haiku-- I am doing fine, I hope you are, too :D

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/3/2011 9:09:00 AM

I thought you meant other kisses make you cold. now i know you meant other snowflakes! I've been up for hours but I don't think my brain is totally awake! can you tell :p

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2011 8:24:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive one..I can just see the scene..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/3/2011 12:51:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Jack

Date: 11/2/2011 11:52:00 AM

Way to go! Congratulations on your first place finish in Brian's contest!!! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2011 11:06:00 AM

I knew this one would do well, Jack. Congrats on your first-place win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2011 9:24:00 AM

Congrats Jack on first place win luv with this excellent entry.. luv it...

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2011 9:10:00 AM

The first snowflake is delightful....it is with the piles of snow at winter's end, that we get tired of those "kisses" ! Nice one, Jack, congratulations!

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/2/2011 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place in Brian's contest Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2011 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2011 9:59:00 PM

What a moving haiku, Jack. I love the idea of a snowflake kissing, at least until the blizzard starts! Cool poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/1/2011 9:24:00 PM

lovely visual Jack.. am so behind in my time on PS.. super busy these days luv.. wonderful to read your poetry my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 7:37:00 PM

I love this, Jack!

Katherine Stella

Date: 11/1/2011 6:57:00 PM

sad but beautiful stated jack I like this thanks for sharing keep up the great writing