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12/09/2023

Magic Nine
Created by Divena Collins. A 9 line- poem that doesn't have any rules as to meter or syllable count... with a rhyme scheme of: abacadaba.

      

Today, I woke to a city dusted with white like a fantasy scene in a snow globe. It snowed heavily most of the night, and everything seems surreal, blanketed in a down duvet that glistens and sparkles in the early morning light. Adding to the illusion of this Hallmark moment, the city cacophony was never so slight. I stare out my window in my slippers and robe, mesmerized, like a deer caught in a headlight.

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Date: 12/10/2023 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2023 3:58:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/9/2023 11:10:00 AM
Hello Emile, I love the snow globes. i am drawn to them. I would pick one up shake it thn watch the snow fall. I would pick up another and shake it watch the snow fall. then walk away. My friend. Enjoy your day. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2023 11:41:00 AM
Hello emile, I wish you a very Merry Christmas. also the best for the New Year. my friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/9/2023 11:27:00 AM
Merry Christmas my friend, it is always a pleasure to hear from you Darlene.

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