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A Small Voice

I see, but I am blind I hear, but I am deaf I taste, but all is bland I touch, but I do not feel I smell, but the scent is elusive Our senses conforming to the world Influenced and molded by that deceptive designer So skillful and crafty in guiding us away Ever so masterfully allowing us our way That we become accustomed to being in the darkness What was once Holy is seen as folly Truth is eroded, past rules are just old-fashioned Being modern, everything is acceptable What fun, join the crowd, we are free Free to experience everything the world offers But we have this small inner voice Almost extinguished by that smiling deceiver Something inside whispers during our quiet times That our way is going against the grain Some unexplainable sixth sense speaking softly Fleeting thoughts of some other direction A pull in our hearts that will not go away Another way begins to enter our consciousness A way that reveals our freedom is actually bondage And that true freedom is found when we come to believe In that One who comes to us where we are All faults known, we are accepted and forgiven By that One who has waited so long for us to come home An unknown kind of love shown by our Heavenly Father Who wants to be in a relationship with those so undeserving The veil is lifted and our senses are refocused on His way We are accepted as a child of God because of One on a cross We then know true freedom enjoyed with Him for eternity

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Date: 11/2/2013 11:41:00 PM
Allen, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:24:00 AM
Soothing and a good one. Congratulations on your feature. Best Regards, Bhavna
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Allen Braaten
Date: 10/29/2013 6:18:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. It is much appreciated. AJ
Date: 10/27/2013 6:07:00 PM
Our senses numb by the god of this world. Praise Jesus we can come alive! Love it!
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Allen Braaten
Date: 10/29/2013 6:31:00 PM
"Coming alive", I was headed north into the cold and darkness and without even realizing what had happened, I was transformed and I was headed south into the warmth and light. God works in mysterious ways. Thanks for the comment. AJ
Date: 6/20/2013 3:38:00 PM
Great testimony of your faith..Sara
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Allen Braaten
Date: 10/29/2013 6:33:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Sara. Much appreciated. AJ
Date: 3/1/2013 7:31:00 PM
Allen, the lifting up the veil, reveals a very strong message. I'm very impressed with the way your poem spoke to me. thank you for the inspiration~ always & forever ;-) LINDA
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Allen Braaten
Date: 3/2/2013 8:12:00 AM
The words were written as guided by the Spirit to speak to the heart. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. AJ
Date: 2/28/2013 8:35:00 PM
This is an awesome poem with an amazing message...thank you for sharing it with me
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Allen Braaten
Date: 2/28/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you. I knew when I wrote it that someone would be quite affected by these words guided by the Spirit. That one is you.

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