A Small Peach Tree

The emerald and still evening
lures the crescent moon rising,
to make a small peach tree shine
as if it were already daytime;
it even invites the brutal wind
to lash it so that its flowers
would lose their pretty petals...
then one of them starts to descend,
others sadly follow behind to resemble Autumn leaves...
who has sympathy for a small peach tree which grieves?

The enchanted, star-draped sky
watches the white petals fall off the small peach tree 
into the lake that earlier reflected its flowery image;
isn't it enraged by the wind's ravage? 
Its anger can last until the deep shadows wane and die:
that's when the light will restore harmony.


Written by Andrew Crisci
for Gail Angel Doyle's contest,
" Petals In The Wind "

on 1/ 15/ 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Andrew, lovely lovely imagery and emotion.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:55 PM
andrew, it seems like ages since I visited you. I'm happy to see you on a winners list now and then so I can see your poetry. this one is unique in the way you told your nature story and you have described it beautifully. Luv, Andrea
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andrew, sorry it's late xx
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 7:19 AM
Very creative and descriptive winning contest entry..Congrats..Sara
Bunton Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
Gorelick Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Truely excellent. Cant find anything else to say except that I love it. Congrats..BG
Squyres Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:37 AM
A different take on the theme of Petals in the wind...but I like. How sad to see such beauty drop and float to the ground. Nature has her own ways..and recycling is one of them Excellent poetry...enjoyed !!
A   Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Andrew, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 10:44 AM
i like this Andrew, I used to grow peaches in my garden until a couple of years ago, when mega frost wiped them out. xx
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