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A Skim-Milk Sky

Like a damp bath towel, a wet mist wraps itself around my shoulders and my spine shudders at its touch. A skim-milk sky retains a bluish tinge as a yellow sun swims behind a reef of clouds absorbing its light like a thirsty sponge. And I see my world through a gray lens that distorts my vision; like I'm wearing the wrong prescription glasses. There is no color other than shades of gray; it's as if Autumn's heart were pierced, and it all bled away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/17/2021 3:15:00 AM
Ooooh.... I love this style! Very crisp and compelling and your piece really exemplifies that. I just might give it a try...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thanks, Lycia, your comments are welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/1/2021 11:30:00 PM
WOW! I can see the mist through your lines, great imagism, Emile:) a fav:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/2/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thanks, so much Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/31/2021 6:36:00 PM
Amazing!!! I could feel the mist..... i love it. Hope I can write something that will be even a little as good as this is. I love it! God bless you, Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2021 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, As always I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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