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July- 25-2026

Rhythm and Rubble Poetry Competition

Sponsor- Kerry Bernartchez


 

A Single White Rose

A single white rose stands, swaying in wheezy wind Got a glimmering glimpse of it in the dewy dawn. On the carpet of green, as a dreamy dame she swings, Demure and slightly bent on a magical monsoon day. A fine flower with petite petals, delicate, Yet sheltered by sharp stinging thorns that pierce. Rain drops drip off her vaporous velvety face As unanticipated tears rush down from one’s eyes. She is fairer far than anything one can spot Her petals, so silky and soft, spun by angels of heaven. Oh, symbol of grace, you rock me in dazzling delight, And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite!
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Narain Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Excellent poem. The roses will love it.
Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Dearest Valsa, your images are as beautiful as a white rose. You did a marvelous job with the contest requirements, "dewy dawn," "petite petals." Beautiful word sounds that speak of this beautiful white rose. I have four white rose bushes that I love! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs, dear friend. So wonderful sitting in the garden with you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 1:53 AM
This is a gorgeous write, Valsa. I finally wrote one too. Just not putting it up till the last minute!
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 2:43 AM
This is a great poem, dear Valsa; its central topic is the contrast between beauty and imperfection, as portrayed by the sight of a single white rose. The theme digs into the flower's fragile but tough character, stressing its divine appeal against its shielding, thorny facets. Good luck with the contest.
Hind Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 10:15 PM
so lovely, Valsa
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:42 AM
- Beautiful ... really beautiful, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:35 AM
A beautiful poem and rose Valsa… Beryl
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:26 AM
Lovely use of the forms required.
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:58 PM
A delightful read! Good luck in the contest Valsa!
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