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Written 24th July, 2026 for Rhythm and Rubble Poetry Contest sponsored by Kerry Bernatchez

A Single White Rose

A single white rose—

soft-scented  
still  

slender—  
silvered stem  
slight sway  

as if  
silence  
spoke  

moonlight—  
settling  
slow  

milky  
luminous  
lingering  

along each  
smooth swell  

petal by petal—  
pale hush  
pressed  

into night’s  
open  
waiting palm  

wind—  
wandering in  

low  
woven  
whisper  

winter  
in its breath  

while the world—  
wider  
waning  
wilting  
wordless  

no crimson  
flare  

no fierce  
fraying  
frill  

no bright  
burning  
insistence—  

only  

soft  
steadfast  
presence  

gathered—  
in stillness  

one bloom  

bare  
but brimming  

bathed  
in blue  
breathing hush  

breeze—  
brush  
bend  
break away  

loosening  

its silence—  
lingers  

slow  
settling  
softness  

velvet  
over skin  

a vow—  
voiceless  

yet held  

fragile—  
fine as frost  

faintly lit  

never faltering  
never folding  

no name  
no claim  

no blame  
no bruise  
no burden  

only—  

this  

single  
white  
rose  

still  

soft  

steadfast
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Daniel Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:05 AM
Beautiful work, Alison, the flow is perfect😊
Kauffman Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 11:37 AM
Allison, this is so thoughtfully written. It goes past a mere description of a white rose - one of my favorites - but explores the inward beauty and the serene existence of this beautiful flower that represent new beginnings. I like the formatting that seems to represent the strong stem that supports the blossom. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you!
Smith  Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Sam. May your life be full of single white roses whenever you need them.
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Lovely images married to word choices. You’re sure really are a gifted poetess! Thanks for sharing!
Smith  Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Karen.
George Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 1:55 AM
So beautifully written! I love it. All the best dear Alison. Into my FAVE.
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 1:57 AM
Thank you Valsa for your fav.
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:38 PM
"no crimson flare " so unique, and hits me as so true, the way you ended this poem is also so rhythmically beautiful, Alison ! "while the world— wider waning wilting wordless " sigh
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:19 PM
dear gifted poetess and soul, so are you :) <3
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:04 PM
Aww Paige you are my heroine
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 4:51 PM
A thoughtful commentary on the life of one white rose. Still soft steadfast has me thinking of the little engine I think I can. . . .Congrats on making latest top 100 poems on soup. Fires in Spain and France scarry. how is Australia doing inn commonwealth games. Regards David
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:59 PM
I believe we have started collecting gold in the pool
Gibbons Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Nice flow of words about white rose beautiful pic indeed shows power of strength standing alone hugsss <3
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:36 PM
Thanks Dorothy
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Dear Alison, Your poem feels like watching a single moment unfold petal by petal, a meditation more than a description, a kind of devotion. A beautiful, luminous piece. Blessings, Daniel
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:35 PM
I hope it keeps bringing you inspiration
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:46 AM
Nice alliteration and beautiful imagery! Good luck in the contest!
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Karen
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