A Single Salty Tear

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June 17, 2023

 

Came the day he told me he'd found someone new
and I stood frozen in both place and time.
My heart was as cold as the Winter wind that blew
and I recall clouds darkening the afternoon sky.

Raindrops fell, but no tears from my eyes.
I didn't acknowledge a word he'd said. I simply turned 
and walked away, numb to feeling anything at all. 
It was late in Autumn when my love was spurned.

I envisioned myself as a single salty tear,
one caused by grief that had spilled unnoticed.
I was lying perched on the cheek of a mournful clown,
whose smile had been painted on, upside down.
I was hoping to leave my sorrow behind
after I'd fallen into the dirt and buried in the ground.

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Date: 6/18/2023 12:33:00 PM
beautiful in its sadness lin, i especially love the first stanza. hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thanks very much, Jan. I hope your hubby is having a great Father's Day.
Date: 6/18/2023 10:59:00 AM
sad and painful poem. Nicely penned.
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Date: 6/18/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jay. Happy Father's Day.
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