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June 17, 2023

 

Came the day he told me he'd found someone new and I stood frozen in both place and time. My heart was as cold as the Winter wind that blew and I recall clouds darkening the afternoon sky. Raindrops fell, but no tears from my eyes. I didn't acknowledge a word he'd said. I simply turned and walked away, numb to feeling anything at all. It was late in Autumn when my love was spurned. I envisioned myself as a single salty tear, one caused by grief that had spilled unnoticed. I was lying perched on the cheek of a mournful clown, whose smile had been painted on, upside down. I was hoping to leave my sorrow behind after I'd fallen into the dirt and buried in the ground.

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Date: 6/18/2023 12:33:00 PM
beautiful in its sadness lin, i especially love the first stanza. hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thanks very much, Jan. I hope your hubby is having a great Father's Day.
Date: 6/18/2023 10:59:00 AM
sad and painful poem. Nicely penned.
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Date: 6/18/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jay. Happy Father's Day.

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