A Simple Slice of Pie

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My granddaughter loves this restaurant and was looking forward to certain foods. A simple slice of pie will do. It’s on the menu - see me point. A ghost restaurant - where’s the crew? Waiter fumbles…who runs this joint? French silk pie, I had my eye on. Light, chocolat-y and with whipped cream There’s none left?! Seems to be a con. Too much to ask? It is my dream. I drove eight hours to eat this pie. All day, I was salivating. See my point. Why won’t you comply? Out-of-towner devastating! Ah! Ah! After I groaned and groaned, you asked your boss and found dessert. Delirious, I laughed…postponed my sweet idea to desert. 11/21/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2022 10:51:00 PM

I hope this is not the truth Kim "I drove eight hours to eat this pie."

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2022 8:40:00 AM

My granddaughter really did..not straight through…she was visiting from Florida.

Deb M

Date: 12/3/2022 5:21:00 AM

Adorable poem Kim about a simple life pleasure….a piece of yummy pie! Add that to your coffee and cup of poetry….perfect, who could ask for more! Debx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2022 4:43:00 PM

For sure! More pie please…

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2022 1:48:00 PM

You can actually buy these in the grocery store now right in the freezer section so they could have gone out and bought one. I think I would have enjoyed that as well. Thanks for sharing and for the visits to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2022 6:38:00 PM

Probably would have but they found one. She likes the fried chicken and the pie at this particular restaurant. Once they were out of cherry pie…the one I wanted :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2022 11:28:00 AM

Kim, you write so beautifully of life's simple joys - a cup of coffee or tea, a piece of pie, a cozy chair to read in on a cold afternoon. I so enjoy these poems. Thank you for highlighting life's simple treasures in plain sight! Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2022 12:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam, for your likewise sweet words.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2022 11:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam, for your likewise sweet words.