A Simple Haiku

the leaves on the tree turned colors in the Autumn and fell to the ground 08/02/15

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2019 3:20:00 PM

One I surprisingly missed. Nice one!

James Inman
Date: 1/9/2019 3:29:00 PM

You've certainly read most of them, and I appreciate that. Thank you.

Greig Turnbull

Date: 10/22/2018 12:14:00 PM

So simple, so profound. Life in 3 short lines.

James Inman
Date: 10/22/2018 3:39:00 PM

Nicely stated Greig. It seems so simple doesn't it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2018 12:46:00 PM

Hello James, yes it is this time of the year. Right now it is raining leaves as the wind blows them off the trees. have a nice day my friend.

James Inman
Date: 10/22/2018 3:38:00 PM

Hi Darlene, sorry for the delayed response. Thanks for visiting.

Chris Hagy

Date: 10/7/2018 11:47:00 PM

Well and simply put indeed James :) Happy fall :)

James Inman
Date: 10/8/2018 6:38:00 AM

Hi Chris, thank you. I don't see much leaf change where I live, what little I do see doesn't come until around January. Thinking about heading to the mountains in a few weeks.