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A Silvery Day

You came down the aisle and took my hand, We exchanged rings with a vow, so now here we stand. The first few years we spent our time, You sharing my reasons; Me sharing your rhyme. The children came...binding us closer together, Our family's boat has sailed in all kinds of weather. We felt the bumps, the heat, the joys, the toil, It was all worth it, as we now look back and smile. Our children grew and we watched them with pride, As only parents can know...from deep down inside. As we see them start down life's path on their own, We remember the work in getting them grown. Silver marks this day at last, Has it really been so many years have passed? In looking back on our love we can truly say, We wouldn't have wanted it any other way. For forever young will our hearts be now, As on that day, when we proclaimed love's vow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/28/2015 9:15:00 AM
Dan, so beautifully penned the love is dripping from each lovely word *7* and thanks for visiting my poem, who do you think ....
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/28/2015 9:13:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words. I wrote this a long time ago, but never put it up on the site.
Date: 9/27/2015 1:14:00 AM
Dan, I hope you framed this in a silver frame for the whole family to enjoy! It is very touching, romantic and lovely! Your lady is fortunate to have you.
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/27/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. I think you might get an argument on that last point from her.
Date: 9/26/2015 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful, Dan. I hope you presented these words as a gift, they are so lovely. I enjoyed reading your write very much ... CayCay
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/26/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thanks CayCay. I actually did present this to my cousins for their 50th anniversary but retitled it A Golden Day.

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