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A Silver Web

Crystal drops of dew
 
sparking in a silver web

belies a fly's gruesome death

coming into view

as vibrations flow and ebb

a spider seals its last breath.



Written Jan. 7th, 2016 
SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed)

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FJ Thomas

Date: 4/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

That's what I have been doing :) I am glad to keep writing; but I will be glad when they feel like they are my own again. Thank you Emile.

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/17/2018 7:19:00 PM

...ahh, I see. I miss those days Emile. That's what I mean when I say my muse is gone. But people don't seem to understand that.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/18/2018 8:25:00 AM

Thanks FJ, I know how you feel when you say your muse is gone...I 've been there...I've written well over a thousand poems and I sometimes think there is nothing I haven't written on and I get frustrated and the words don't come...but when that happens I challenge myself with a type of form poetry that I am not used to, (free verse, Sedoka / Rhyme, Violette etc) and I find the restrictive forms spur my mind. Emile.

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/17/2018 5:49:00 PM

Beautiful Emile. ...what gave you the idea of focusing on this scene?

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/17/2018 6:53:00 PM

Thanks FJ, I never know what I'm going to write, but once I start it sort of writes itself as I go along, Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:16:00 PM

Emile, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/29/2016 8:19:00 AM

Thanks LINDA, your visits and comments are always welcome. Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2016 11:20:00 AM

Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. I really like the descriptive and expressive qualities of this one..Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thanks Sara, your visits are always welcome. Emile.