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A Silver Web

Crystal drops of dew
 
sparking in a silver web

belies a fly's gruesome death

coming into view

as vibrations flow and ebb

a spider seals its last breath.



Written Jan. 7th, 2016 
SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed)

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2016

allusionbeautyimageryimaginationinsectsedoka

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April 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM

That's what I have been doing :) I am glad to keep writing; but I will be glad when they feel like they are my own again. Thank you Emile.

April 17, 2018 at 7:19 PM

...ahh, I see. I miss those days Emile. That's what I mean when I say my muse is gone. But people don't seem to understand that.

April 18, 2018 at 8:25 AM

Thanks FJ, I know how you feel when you say your muse is gone...I 've been there...I've written well over a thousand poems and I sometimes think there is nothing I haven't written on and I get frustrated and the words don't come...but when that happens I challenge myself with a type of form poetry that I am not used to, (free verse, Sedoka / Rhyme, Violette etc) and I find the restrictive forms spur my mind. Emile.

April 17, 2018 at 5:49 PM

Beautiful Emile. ...what gave you the idea of focusing on this scene?

April 17, 2018 at 6:53 PM

Thanks FJ, I never know what I'm going to write, but once I start it sort of writes itself as I go along, Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

January 28, 2016 at 9:16 PM

Emile, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

January 29, 2016 at 8:19 AM

Thanks LINDA, your visits and comments are always welcome. Emile.

January 23, 2016 at 11:20 AM

Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. I really like the descriptive and expressive qualities of this one..Sara

January 23, 2016 at 2:51 PM

Thanks Sara, your visits are always welcome. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

January 19, 2016 at 4:10 PM

wow,for me this i a first placer!! Congrats though. Glad to see it again.

January 20, 2016 at 8:15 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Beautiful Scars

January 18, 2016 at 11:24 AM

Emile, congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for being a part of it! *smiles* -luloo

January 18, 2016 at 12:39 PM

Thanks Laura. I appreciate both the opportunity and the placement. Emile.

January 18, 2016 at 10:51 AM

EMILE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

January 18, 2016 at 12:40 PM

Thanks SCAT, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.

January 11, 2016 at 8:30 AM

This is excellent! Janice

January 11, 2016 at 2:45 PM

Thanks Janice, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.

January 7, 2016 at 4:19 PM

this is lovely Emile, nice write

January 7, 2016 at 4:26 PM

Thanks White Sage, I truly appreciate your comments of support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2016 at 3:49 PM

WELL DONE for the challenge. I love seeing these rhymed ones.

January 7, 2016 at 4:25 PM

Thanks Andrea, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.

January 7, 2016 at 3:09 PM

such beauty in life and death, and nature, yet the beauty hides survival, this is how i see this most wonderful poem of your Emile.

January 7, 2016 at 4:25 PM

Thanks Harry, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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