Barbara Gorelick Poet Couplet

A Silly Chicken Poem

Looking for adventure a chicken crossed the road
Danger! Danger! Lest you be flattened like a toad...

But when our little chicky got to the other side..
"Why it's no different here!" she so sadly  cried...

 She started to scratch about, as chickens are apt to do
Just why she did that..she really had no clue..

She met a sneaky fox, a handsome kind of guy
She had no idea, he was thinking of pot pie..

He madly chased her through some yellow grass
For he had been looking for a succulent little lass..

With a frightened squawk she headed straight for home
With ruffled feathers she vowed no more to roam..

Now that's the end  of my silly chicken tale
Negative comments please send to my soup mail...

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Robert Pettit February 12, 2011 at 10:41 PM This is about as well as any chicken poem can be written. It have good descriptiveness and rhyming. If Frank Perdue and Colonel Harlan Sanders were alive today, I'm sure both of them would appreciate your work.

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 28, 2010 at 9:16 PM lol, no negatives here, this is fun and you tell the tale well, enjoyed it:)

Carolyn Devonshire November 24, 2010 at 11:55 AM No Soup mail for you, dear LNC! This was hilarious. I once saw chickens playing in the road while driving to work. The next day the home where they resided had a sign posted: "Barbecued chicken." Thanks for the smiles today, Barbara. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 21, 2010 at 9:29 AM Enjoyed bthe humor and fun in this write, Barbara

Carrie Richards November 21, 2010 at 7:07 AM You are so funny, Barbara.....this is a fun one to read to my grandkids!! :)

Marilyn Hernandez November 20, 2010 at 10:02 PM Adorable! I think the humor hit me harder because my mom actually has chickens in the back yard, and they really can be quite hilarious. And yes, they have crossed the road. Enjoyed this very much. By the way, thank you for your comment on my poem "Empty Apartment." It's nice to have someone to relate to.

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2010 at 9:05 PM this humurous piece sent me reeling, barbara!! much enjoyed.. thanks for your response re my " pensee.." my poet friend and i discovered this from a book.. so there, have fun doing a bit of it.. warmest, nette

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2010 at 8:44 PM hahaha, the way you ended this one. NO negative comments, I found this really cute! Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2010 at 11:40 AM lol i love the fourth stanza,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Deb Wilson November 20, 2010 at 9:30 AM this was really cute!take care ~Deb

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2010 at 6:39 AM Nothing negative here..I am glad that you chose this old one and added a new modern twist to add a little humor to our day..Sara

John Loving Iii November 20, 2010 at 6:35 AM cute, it got a smile out of me. john