A Silk Purse Made From Sows Ear-W

Laws are made by Congress for public
Public suffer by virtue of its click
Law maker keep loopholes
As they don’t have souls
Claim to be more than equal to check.

No lack of *Napoleon or *Snowball
Workhorses like *Boxer at their call
To use and abuse *Windmill
They choose their own deal
People left pauper after their fall.
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Third Place winner in
Contest: Double Limerick by JOhn Freeman & Carolyn Devonshire
Inspired Linda-marie"s Limerick  "Zip It"

U.S.A. Congress imposes the LAW,
"Do as I say, but not do" hence the flaw,
While we earn large salary,
You struggle in poverty,
An amendment will just stick in our craw.
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** Napoleon and Snowball are the leaders in Animal Farm fighting for the power.
Boxer is a character who looks on which side of the bread is buttered.
Windmill  just a symbol of a project thro' which the politicians grind their axe.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Yes I recognized those characters from Animal Farm! Congrats on your limerick that also is inspired by both LInda and a classic novel. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations to you Dr. Ram on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Great work Dr. Mehta. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Scripca Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Congrats for your well deserved win. Alll the best, Iolanda
Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 4:25 PM
John and I were far apart on our rankings, Dr. Ram. This was one of my favorite entries. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Congrats Sr. Ram on your winning poem in the Double Limerick contest with this super piece of poetry.. enjoy another momentous victory this happy Sunday.. and we won twice my friend.. so its all good ..luv..from Italy...
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Thanks Dr Ram fo the special effort, and congratulations on your place in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Keogh Jr. Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Dr. you get the seven this time for Orwell. Great pick. He has been proven right, lamentably. We have seen the politics twisted with the words and the language turned against us. Orwell was right. I am sorry to say. Thank you for picking my pantoum. I had never tried that form before. Regards, Gerard.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Appreciate your kind words today Dr. Ram and good luck entering my new contest.. only one top winner this time for my final contest before my wedding... but after the honeymoon.. watch out.. new and fresh ideas will be on my mind..my friend..with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Thankxx for using my ZIP IT Dr. Ram and u have created a wonderful re write from the wording.. good luck in the Double Limerick contest .. this is more than brilliant ..explanation and all.. luv..
Devonshire Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Biting satire, Dr. Ram! You nailed this one. Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 7:02 AM
very good Dr. love this... always Michael
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