A Short Road To War

A white hot finger points your way,
pushing air aside with each advancing message.
The renting of air with thunder clap abroad
makes too much noise, chattering like rattling lungs

Whispers to an unacknowledged Lord
bringing forward promised prayers.
The elastic of fear bringing Him ever closer

Listen, above the din, a whisper.
Just a faint whisper in the grass.
A tap on the shoulder, a poke in the chest

Cold, so very cold, yet burning hot.
With stench of faeces left too long,
the shadow of death falls over this life.
As yet unknown to its carrier

This cold, sucking, life-withdrawing colourless odour.
This all-pervading, all consuming watered soul,
so thinly veiled with blood and flesh.

This breathing vessel of emptied life.
With ice rink stare upon which skaters cut
figures to the reapers dance

This day, this very focal point,
where time no longer elapses, shall
feel the clod but not the shovel.
And keep a watch without relief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:22 AM
Well done Terry... strong, vibrant ianguage in support of your central premise. Superb as always! Keith
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:52 AM
I have never seen combat... God Bless those who have. K.
Robinson Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Thanks Keith. Personal experiences on the field of battle prompted this one
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:27 AM
sorry for the dup...for some reason I'm seeing double this morning! K.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:48 PM
You are welcome Terry
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November 12, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Terry, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Robinson Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thanks Linda
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