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A Shipboard Romance

A man and woman on either side of a fence For long strangers, once met by sheer chance A spark of love was lit in an instance Its flame was fanned through many a glance And eventually got blazed into a hot romance Until it was steadied through an alliance Days and months flowed smooth in passionate romance As man and wife they decided to live in perfect compliance They often felt their minds go upbeat in a dance Life breathed out a rare and sweet fragrance And their faces always gleamed in bright radiance They flitted like butterflies across life’s expanse Over calm waters, they glided like a pair of swans Around their future, they braided umpteen plans There was always a spark of glitter in their glance Never once they suspected any mischance After a year, their love was tested through penance Days slouched on without any parlance, Until their life was couched in dumb silence. In secret, they nursed many a grievance, And saw each other with a vengeance. This often took a turn of violence From this bondage, they longed for riddance And through a divorce, finally sought a deliverance! ( to be continued) Sept.23.2022 Chapter. 1. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Matt Caliri

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Date: 9/23/2022 1:40:00 PM
I like the quote from someone I don't remember their name ... "Love is like a cigar, the brighter in burns the sooner the ashes." Good Chapter 1, Valsa. Good luck my friend! Bill
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Date: 9/23/2022 12:13:00 PM
A fine example of so many peoples lives today Valsa. Your words ring true. Thank you for sharing and be blessed...
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Date: 9/23/2022 11:23:00 AM
No need to continue this story as we have heard it all before . . . . Aloha!
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Date: 9/23/2022 10:12:00 AM
Ah, sometimes those fires stoke bright, but they die during the night, nicely penned, gl in the contest Valsa, this was very creative,
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Date: 9/23/2022 5:42:00 AM
As the narrative so deftly demonstrates, Valsa, love is not immune to the ups and downs that are a natural part of living. How very fascinating this is. You have a beautiful way of thinking about themes that are deep and cause a lot of introspection. I admire the manner in which you approach these topics. Best wishes with the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2022 6:38:00 AM
Reading your comment is such a pleasure and so gratifying too. Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Date: 9/23/2022 5:23:00 AM
What a pity that like the tide, love come in and ebbs out again. Will we see chapter two? Hugs.
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Date: 9/23/2022 6:37:00 AM
Of course. Perhaps Chapter three too. Let me try ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !
Date: 9/23/2022 4:36:00 AM
Great start to the story Valsa, you should continue it into a short story. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:51:00 AM
In fact only after coming to Poetry Soup, I have learnt the different forms of poetry ! This chapter wise poem, I am seeing for the first time. Thanks a lot Tom for reading this.
Date: 9/23/2022 4:36:00 AM
Love is no stranger to ebb and flow of life.--as you so well convey in this story, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:49:00 AM
Yes, love keeps ebbing and flowing ! Thanks dear Vijay for reading this, though this is rather silly !

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