A Shipboard Romance

A man and woman on either side of a fence
For long strangers, once met by sheer chance
A spark of love was lit in an instance
Its flame was fanned through many a glance
And eventually got blazed into a hot romance
Until it was steadied through an alliance
Days and months flowed smooth in passionate romance
As man and wife they decided to live in perfect compliance

They often felt their minds go upbeat in a dance
Life breathed out a rare and sweet fragrance
And their faces always gleamed in bright radiance
They flitted like butterflies across life’s expanse
Over calm waters, they glided like a pair of swans
Around their future, they braided umpteen plans
There was always a spark of glitter in their glance
Never once they suspected any mischance

After a year, their love was tested through penance
Days slouched on without any parlance,
Until their life was couched in dumb silence.
In secret, they nursed many a grievance,
And saw each other with a vengeance.
This often took a turn of violence
From this bondage, they longed for riddance
And through a divorce, finally sought a deliverance!
( to be continued)

Sept.23.2022

Chapter. 1. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 9/23/2022 1:40:00 PM
I like the quote from someone I don't remember their name ... "Love is like a cigar, the brighter in burns the sooner the ashes." Good Chapter 1, Valsa. Good luck my friend! Bill
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Date: 9/23/2022 12:13:00 PM
A fine example of so many peoples lives today Valsa. Your words ring true. Thank you for sharing and be blessed...
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Date: 9/23/2022 11:23:00 AM
No need to continue this story as we have heard it all before . . . . Aloha!
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Date: 9/23/2022 10:12:00 AM
Ah, sometimes those fires stoke bright, but they die during the night, nicely penned, gl in the contest Valsa, this was very creative,
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Date: 9/23/2022 5:42:00 AM
As the narrative so deftly demonstrates, Valsa, love is not immune to the ups and downs that are a natural part of living. How very fascinating this is. You have a beautiful way of thinking about themes that are deep and cause a lot of introspection. I admire the manner in which you approach these topics. Best wishes with the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2022 6:38:00 AM
Reading your comment is such a pleasure and so gratifying too. Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Date: 9/23/2022 5:23:00 AM
What a pity that like the tide, love come in and ebbs out again. Will we see chapter two? Hugs.
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Date: 9/23/2022 6:37:00 AM
Of course. Perhaps Chapter three too. Let me try ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !
Date: 9/23/2022 4:36:00 AM
Great start to the story Valsa, you should continue it into a short story. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:51:00 AM
In fact only after coming to Poetry Soup, I have learnt the different forms of poetry ! This chapter wise poem, I am seeing for the first time. Thanks a lot Tom for reading this.
Date: 9/23/2022 4:36:00 AM
Love is no stranger to ebb and flow of life.--as you so well convey in this story, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:49:00 AM
Yes, love keeps ebbing and flowing ! Thanks dear Vijay for reading this, though this is rather silly !
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