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A Shift

young man’s empathy towards his father a shift of care and concern grand reversal of roles Kimo Form Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Date: 04-09-2021 Place : 1st

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Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 9:04:00 PM

Patri, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2021 5:24:00 AM

This can be true in some families. Great way to express this idea. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 4:29:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:44:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2021 9:54:00 AM

Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:43:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2021 8:05:00 AM

Yes, this is so true about family and what happens with time. Congrats, Patri.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:43:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2021 3:37:00 PM

i can relate big time with my mum many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2021 7:42:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2021 5:13:00 AM

For sure!