a shaman of guatemala

I fear the shamans, great or small,
I saw one, with long black hair,
In a cemetery of the green Guatemala,
He danced among the colored tombs,

it was inhabited by the spirits of the dead,
Better to keep away from this king,
I have hidden behind graves,
He spoke to the spirits, to the blue ghosts

He agitated a sort of burning ossuary,
He screamed and danced, agitated like a nightmare,
I was for a moment frightened and petrified, seized
I preferred to run away without taking a picture.
The moon began to whiten on the grey pines.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Yes. I agree. These people are scary. Kind of like witch doctors, right?
Canerdy Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 3:26 PM
Vividly descriptive and chilling, Yann! Janice
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 9:31 PM
Sounds like a real scary situation, Yann. I enjoyed this poem a lot, especially the spooky ending.
George Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Hi Yaan, your experience must have been quite scary. Shamans keep contact with the spirits. No wonder you met him in a cemetery. Beautifully penned with choice words.
Empress Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 10:05 PM
Dear Yann, youve described the scene so vividly, and yes shamans can be scary, and i fear that they play with the dark and evil too, scary, brilliant word weaving throughout this .. pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Rolland Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 11:10 AM
i confirm, it was scary, they have great mind and power, i could feel that, thanks for your friendly comment IE best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 1:35 AM
A frightening apparition of Halloween. Perfectly described. Well done.
Rolland Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 3:40 AM
thanks a lot victor, this was an interesting encounter in fact, still remembering
Bauer Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 1:32 PM
you've painted a vivid picture with your words, yann, and have conjured up a spooky scene. i love the way you've ended this, as well...
Rolland Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 5:11 PM
yes Ilene, it was scary, old story i can't forget, thank you for stopping by
Anaya Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 8:19 AM
This is quite chilling, Yann. It was Dia De Los Muertos on the first and Dia De Los Santos on the second, you may have encountered a ritual, as the shaman set the tone. Love your storytelling. Wishing you happy travels! ~Anaya
Rolland Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Thanks Anaya, you words are very considered ans appreciated
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