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A Shadow On My Poetry


my soul, gossamer, diaphanous, wispy, transparent-
         my lines, cobwebs of chiffon
glimpses in poems of my deep sadness
I pen in innocence 
sublime, my ramblings
rapturous writing
       turning words into poems
from deep within-
   bleeding from my pen . . . 
and then comes the vile and evil
filled with bitterness
and it makes me so angry
you think your loathsomeness
can touch me      
        envious
          spiteful
I recoil from your soul's ugliness-
pathetic and despicable and sickening is your brokenness
loneliness your eternity . . . 
I slowly remove your blood soaked dagger
    from my heart and the blood is dripping red
the pieces of my hearts lay
    beneath my feet and I do not hesitate
I pick up every shattered fragment
of the puzzle that is me and I put each piece back 
in place, and my message to you, never, ever    
even be a shadow upon my poetry again
   for I have a determination
                  you cannot fathom . . .

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September 7, 2015

Poetry/Free Verse/a shadow on my poetry
Copyright Protected, ID 15-706-730-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written in Pseudonym.

Entered in the contest, A Poem You Wrote In Anger, 
sponsor, Skat

Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/20/2016 12:17:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome somewhat angry win. Love LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2016 8:52:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, the awesome and the love !
Date: 3/16/2016 8:31:00 AM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Another beautiful write filled with such deep emotion. May your heart ever sing. Has to be a top rating, a seven....Vlad.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2016 8:58:00 AM
Mike, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful and the 7, and of course the compliment, appreciate so much !
Date: 3/15/2016 7:10:00 AM
Hi BW. Congrats for your top placement with yet another splashing literary hit!!! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 2:02:00 PM
Teddy, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the compliment ~
Date: 3/14/2016 10:53:00 AM
broken, congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting this Angry Topic. Have a nice day **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2016 10:56:00 AM
Skat, thanks so much for the contest and a chance to dust off my angry poem, and thanks for my wonderful placement, appreciate !
Date: 9/9/2015 10:56:00 AM
Excellent; deep and powerful. This is prime Broken Wings poetry.
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:28:00 AM
Enjoyed... SKAT
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:44:00 AM
Wow deep and powerful broken! Beautifully expressed emotions and thoughts!
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:03:00 PM
Yes, this is very deep, Constance. I especially like the ending. those last two lines describe you to a T!!
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Date: 9/7/2015 5:52:00 PM
I don't know if your poem reflects a reality or not, never the less it reveals wisdom and strength that can only be learned, it reveals the iron stature of your soul, defiant..a powerful poem with a message..well written my poetic friend..
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Date: 9/7/2015 2:23:00 PM
BW, this is a well written dark write. You write from the heart, whether its dark or light its an amazing sight. I'm constantly amazed your pen. :-) Alexis 7
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Date: 9/7/2015 1:03:00 PM
Oh...Constance, this is so sad. Is someone bullying you? Please be strong. You are beautiful and your poetry is a dream....I'm sending you hugs, dear.
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Date: 9/7/2015 12:47:00 PM
Incredible write. Love the way it was written with deep thoughts. Love your style also. Very impressive Constance. Great effort,
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