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A Shade Too Far

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Listen to poem:
You broke my umbrella
with your silly swift kick.
Now you want to shelter
with me, from the rain.
Well its time you faced
the consequences of my disdain
for all the pain and rain
you've brought to our
lame duck relationship!
No one loves an arcane fool
whose jokes are no-brainers,
not a tad funny at all, 
just silly inane insane garbage!
Look, your wet! Yuck! 
You're dripping on me!
Leave me alone!

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Date: 9/24/2023 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John. Many blessings to you
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John Anderson
Date: 9/24/2023 10:57:00 PM
Thanks very much for the feedback. Cheers and Best Wishes

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