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A Seventies Production

Stage set: Nineteen Seventy-Two

Enter threshold Jolly Jumper bouncing baby girl
   toes grazing the shag

Next scene a little quicker
   Clad in plaid she's a Big Wheels and corduroy blur
   moving the plot along

Intermission (Orange Crush, Pop Rocks and Pixie Sticks)

Action: The games begin
   Go Fish your Fisher Price Little People
   out of the sandbox
   you're too young to play with Matchbox
   so cool until that Etch A Sketchy kid
   sends your Slinky down the stairs

Plot twist: the corner store Mexican Jumping Beans
   were infinitely more entertaining than Pet Rocks

                           The End


   Well not "The End"
   Training wheels are off and so is the star of the show
   Careening towards the eighties
   With her Choose Your Own Adventure collection in tow





18.02.25

Composed for Line Gauthier's
Where were you in the 70's?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 10:41:00 AM
You should follow it up with each decade now Maureen. You did such a great job tell us more!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/18/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you :) Oh so tempting! Those nineties though... Not so sure I want to out myself there lol ;)
Date: 3/11/2018 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen, so well written and a joy to read. :))
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2018 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Roy! It was a joy to write :) xomo!!
Date: 3/11/2018 3:24:00 AM
A fun take on the theme, almost expected ' A Quinn Martin production', Maureen. Congrats! Viv x
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2018 10:09:00 AM
Lol! Awesome :) thank you Viv! xomo
Date: 3/10/2018 2:17:00 PM
Congratulation on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Eve :) xomo!
Date: 3/10/2018 12:32:00 PM
Fabulous style, Maureen. A fun read. Congrats.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank YOU Line! Your contest was SO fun to write for! Love and hug :) xomo!
Date: 2/28/2018 4:12:00 PM
Maureen, I really like this! Janice
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/28/2018 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Janice! It was funnnn xomo! :)
Date: 2/27/2018 3:18:00 PM
SO seventies of you!! Wish I could have thought up such a clever way to do my own rendition of it!!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/28/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you! I had play playing in my head a few days before the play took shape, one of those right in front of noses kinda things ;)
Date: 2/26/2018 3:47:00 PM
Awesome...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/26/2018 8:06:00 PM
Thankya :)
Date: 2/26/2018 5:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem in images of the seventies..very uniquely articulated..best for a win, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/26/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! A fun one to write for, well the 70's were fun for me. ;) xomo!
Date: 2/26/2018 3:35:00 AM
'Pop rocks' = fizzy sherbert? Pixie sticks, havn't a clue, sound good though! Good luck in the contest! Mick ;-)
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Date: 2/26/2018 6:28:00 AM
A Pop Rocks virgin! Little candy nuggets that explode in fizzy crackles and pops in your mouth. Pixie sticks, picture a drinking straw full of powdered, coloured, flavoured sugar, tear, tip, and down the hatch, then WHEEEEEE!

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