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A Seraphim Sky

i choose to see truth the unfolding beauty of a seraphim sky with two wings covering face with two wings covering feet with two wings hovering by God seated on throne the fiery purity of a seraphim sky true blue, celestial lift flutter of hallelujah bright burning of love for God 1/26/2020 Syllables used 5/7/5/7/7/7/5/7/5/7/7/7

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James Horn

Date: 2/6/2020 3:04:00 PM

Without a doubt, Book of Revelations related. We are in Chapter 8 next Tuesday. Things seem to usually consist of 3, 4 and 7 items. We are talking about scrolls right now.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2020 7:59:00 PM

Very nice, James! As it says there is a blessing when you read the book of Revelation. <3 Kim

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2020 11:34:00 AM

I liked the gentle repetition in this one. "with two wings covering face with two wings covering feet with two wings hovering by God seated on throne"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 2:45:00 PM

Thank you! Hugs...Kim

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/27/2020 5:18:00 AM

Flutter of Hallelujah ...I like that

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Kai!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/26/2020 11:51:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this spirited truth making me worshipful, especially with these words: "flutter of hallelujah bright burning of love for God." God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Beata! Sharing the love of God is most wonderful!