A Sentimental Letter To My Only True Love

My dearest, darling lover, 
Through this electronic medium
I touch and caress you with my love

As you read these my words to you
Feel the tenderness of my lips upon your neck
The aching of my breast, molded to your chest

Stronger than the miles between us, is our love
Stronger than the issues that separate us, is our love
The vastness and continuity that envelopes our heart

I now wait with longing, my darling, and sweetheart
For the day, which seems to stretch each hour of the clock
When we will be one, as we should have been, so long ago

I need your touch, as the river needs the water to get along
I have been incomplete without you my sweetest love
I thirst for your loving, as the desert longs for the rain drops  


I wait, impatiently my love, with bated breath
Watching that clock, which I have confounded for ticking too slowly
For that day, that hour, that minute, that second, when you shall be mine
All mine.  I love you, so much, dearest, with everything that’s in me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Aderounmu Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Hi Joy, i sincerely love you love in this complete empathical piece. Fisayo.
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Hi Joy, Amazing; I could feel the passion through your words! What a great gift to love in this way... = ) Lay
Esquire Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Dear Joy, A double Congratulations, YOUR Win in Audrey's Contest and YOUR Featured Honor I have read all of David's JEW POEMS about YOU and am now reading Your POEMS about Him I wish YOU both the Blooming of YOUR LOVE " A LOVE ETERNAL, EVERLASTING " I know the Feelings LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege.. .HG
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:09 AM
thankxxx Joy .. appreciate your warm and welcome comments .. blessings and luv to u today .. and great poetry ..
Wellington Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 5:39 AM
I want to thank everyone who took the time to read my write and to give a well appreciated comment. Thanks and good luck to all as we keep the soup pot boiling. One love. Joy (Jew)
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on your win Joy in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Congrats Joy my friend on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. so special.. so enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joy! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations ..Sara
Falotico Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Excellent write and well deserved win Joy..Congrats
Neels Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Joy, congratulations on your win in Audrey's contest with this one straight from your heart. With love seeping through each line. Hope your weekend is a great one ~ love Wilma
Haick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Dear Joy, Thank you for supporting my contest! Your heart speaks of the beautiful love it holds for your David! I enjoyed reading this very much! Congratulations!
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations Joy on your second place win. Well deserved success. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joy
Temkin Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Beautiful poem and so pure and rich with emotion. Congrats on being featured on the home page :) Best wishes
Devonshire Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:18 AM
So many great lines that express your love for David, Joy. My favorite is "I need your touch as the river needs water." That sums up the sentiments in your love letter so well! Wishing you success in Audrey's contest! Love, Carolyn
Wellington Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:44 AM
I thank everyone who has commented on my write and took the time, even more so, to read. Much appreciated. Joy (Jew)
Culverhouse Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:34 AM
you have made a big hit on the suop!! YOu have been featured on the home page with this well deservinng poem.
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Joy. Love, Carol
M V Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 8:55 AM
well written, joy.your love thoughts are very intense indeed.nice enjoyable lines.fabiyas
Taylor Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Awesome entry, Joy. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your kind words. Have a super week. xxxRalph
Roberts Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 11:26 PM
lovely poem and good luck in the contest , re: your comments on "The first snowfall", its for a contest , we have definitely not had snow yet.
Temkin Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:10 PM
congrats on being featured! :) I really enjoyed this poem it is so touching and sweet I wish you the best.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Congrats Joy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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October 31, 2010 at 2:33 PM
it's tough when you have to tell time by the calender. while waiting is not measured by minutes but by weeks and months. we thank God for the internet our closest friend keeping us in touch with the touch of our hands. our words supply the needs we need so much to give. something for the heart, a reason to live.
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