A Sense of Wonder

A sense of wonder at glistening snow
    spiraling high, in drifts it goes  

  A bluebird hops, so delicate, white powder stirred
    Dream on, sweet angel, imagination spurred
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Boles Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 6:14 PM
The nature lover's side in you, painting a lustrous scenery...scribbling inspiring poetic lines too, GW!...ab
Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Thanks for the nice review, Anselmo.
Tor Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 3:27 PM
Love this one Gershon a favorite...
Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Thank you for the fave, Michael!
George Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 9:22 PM
You have left in my mind a beautiful image of snow being piled up and a tiny blue bird hopping on it stirring powdery snow.... ! A refreshing image.
Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:31 PM
That tiny bird stands out against the snow, doesn't it?
Hawkins Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 7:04 PM
It is not like you to sing the blues, Gershon. Leave that to Guy Mitchell. A very pretty couplet, Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Oh, occasionally I like those blues.
Faulkner Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Nice contrast of the winter snow and the bluebird, quite a wondrous sight!
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:50 PM
Keeps me singin' 'the whites.' ~ I'm blue enough already
Sands Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:24 AM
I enjoyed this Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:50 PM
Thank you for letting me know, Heidi!
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