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A Sense of Emptiness

The nothingness ancient Transformed into the universe nascent, Matter came from silence The core of cosmic sense Voids in all things’ essence Creator’s unique space they represent. In all things that exists The universal voidness still persists In depth of living mind Of the evolved mankind Filled with emotions blind, Life gets attached although conscience resists. Full sky holds its clouds low They melt in storm, make the sad sky hollow, Happy trees green in spring Don’t hear the birds near sing When in fall leaves grow wing, Life plunged in barrenness turns fallow. In loss clouded mind grieves Melt emotion drains, emptiness it leaves, Let soul clear delusion From mind in seclusion, Open devout vision Know how peace from emptiness life retrieves. December 21. 2017. Contest : Rhyme Me A Poem. Sponsor : Broken Wings.

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Date: 1/14/2018 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Subimal! Well done!!! ~Judy
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/18/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Judi.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fine piece.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/18/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:15:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest. It is obvious to me that you worked hard on this write. Well done !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/18/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, BW for liking the poem and for placement. Yes, it needs hard work, sometimes.
Date: 1/12/2018 5:45:00 AM
great poem Subimal, congrats :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/18/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thank you, Laura.
Date: 1/11/2018 11:16:00 PM
Well done, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/12/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 1/11/2018 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Subimal, so very sad.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/12/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.

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