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A Senryu

AU REVOIR he dusted the album- a memory of love trickled down his cheek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/1/2010 9:05:00 PM
Hi Brian! Love the description of tears as a memory. Beautifully written. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:27:00 PM
amazing image! Brian!....mail...jimbo
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:10:00 AM
Have some of those old albums myself Brian ..the memories your words brought back reflect my moments now.. a wonderful intro line my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/1/2010 3:54:00 AM
Wow Brian, I love the image of your senryu.. Goodbye is never easy.. enjoyed this :-) regards Wilma
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