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A Senior Moment Tb

A Senior moment 
         
              By arched trellis 
              Quaintly kissing 
              Neath mistletoe

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Linda Alice Fowler

December 27, 2023 at 6:29 AM

Ah, such sweetness, such brilliance! :)

Terry Miller

November 20, 2023 at 3:51 AM

Oh so well done what a neat rhyme!, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2023 at 8:51 PM

The rhyme is so grandly hidden! Beautiful! Congratulations!

Charles Messina

November 17, 2023 at 4:26 AM

Just love this, David. Such a charming and beauktiful write. Congratulations on your win!

Terry Flood

November 8, 2023 at 6:36 AM

From what I’ve seen, the standard of entries in this contest is gonna take some serious judging. This is only gonna make the task even harder. Poor old Charlie

David Kavanagh

November 8, 2023 at 10:16 AM

Ah well who’d be a judge anyway, certainly not me, thanks for the kind comment, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

November 6, 2023 at 1:23 PM

True love never dies. Tom

David Kavanagh

November 6, 2023 at 1:36 PM

A very true statement Tom, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

November 6, 2023 at 3:28 AM

Oh wow! A sure shot winner

David Kavanagh

November 6, 2023 at 3:35 AM

Good to hear from you Seeker, was yourself that introduced me to this form a few years back, thanks again, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

November 6, 2023 at 12:42 AM

Wonder how many mistletoes you're in search of during the festivities. Enjoy yourself. Blessings.

David Kavanagh

November 6, 2023 at 3:33 AM

Ha! that would be all subjective Victor to whoever’s standing underneath it, cheers David

Jan Allison

November 5, 2023 at 3:38 PM

sweet poem David, young man you have years before you are a senior! hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

November 5, 2023 at 3:47 PM

Heya Jan, I hope I’m as feisty as the couple above in my senior years, but to be honest I don’t think that far ahead, tomorrow is far enough lol! Cheers David