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A Senior moment By arched trellis Quaintly kissing Neath mistletoe

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/27/2023 6:29:00 AM

Ah, such sweetness, such brilliance! :)

Terry Miller

Date: 11/20/2023 3:51:00 AM

Oh so well done what a neat rhyme!, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:51:00 PM

The rhyme is so grandly hidden! Beautiful! Congratulations!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:26:00 AM

Just love this, David. Such a charming and beauktiful write. Congratulations on your win!

Terry Flood

Date: 11/8/2023 6:36:00 AM

From what I’ve seen, the standard of entries in this contest is gonna take some serious judging. This is only gonna make the task even harder. Poor old Charlie

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/8/2023 10:16:00 AM

Ah well who’d be a judge anyway, certainly not me, thanks for the kind comment, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/6/2023 1:23:00 PM

True love never dies. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/6/2023 1:36:00 PM

A very true statement Tom, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/6/2023 3:28:00 AM

Oh wow! A sure shot winner

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/6/2023 3:35:00 AM

Good to hear from you Seeker, was yourself that introduced me to this form a few years back, thanks again, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2023 12:42:00 AM

Wonder how many mistletoes you're in search of during the festivities. Enjoy yourself. Blessings.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/6/2023 3:33:00 AM

Ha! that would be all subjective Victor to whoever’s standing underneath it, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2023 3:38:00 PM

sweet poem David, young man you have years before you are a senior! hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/5/2023 3:47:00 PM

Heya Jan, I hope I’m as feisty as the couple above in my senior years, but to be honest I don’t think that far ahead, tomorrow is far enough lol! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/5/2023 2:39:00 PM

That's clever. I was convinced either mine was wrong or yours was - such a subtle rhyme scheme - mine sits there like a sledgehammer. I'm impressed :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/5/2023 2:55:00 PM

Subtlety was always the aim here Dilly, but hey! sometimes the sledgehammer effect works best, if the blow is delivered behind a pillow, thanks so much, cheers David