A Secret World

Along a country road,
beyond the guard rail,
past the visible vines,
lurks an ancient jungle.
Most who travel pass
don’t have an inkling of
the depth of the danger—
this cliff so close by,
this mystery in their midst.

The steep-slanting ground
and lush vegetation
in quintessential green
drop, and drop again
to a long-forgotten brook
that one can only hear--
though perhaps by peering,
one can glimpse refracted light
sparkling from its surface.

After blithely flowing
through this lost world
of twisted roots and tree trunks,
the creek quickly merges
with the Quaboag River,
and, coming into normalcy, 
loses some allure.

Another mystery calls from
this roughly hewn valley
(gouged out by ice sheets
and still too severe
for human encroachment).
More resonant than the birds
and deeper than the stream,
it registers in a region
somewhere in the soul.

Taking one by surprise,
this precarious paradise
suddenly feels familiar,
as though we’d been there once,
as though we all belonged there,
long, long ago, 
before the last ice age,
in some primal place
before mills and industry,
before roads and rails.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 6:49 AM
Seems you feel the same way about nature as I do; it's the most amazing and spiritual thing on this earth; our connection to it makes the soul sing. Very nice penning Carol.
Mays Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 9:38 PM
Thank you. I thought I had replied to your comment last month, but I don't see any such reply. Sorry about that. I will check again for nature poems on your page.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful way to honor and share such "secret worlds" ~
Buehler Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Loved your poem contrasting the modern and manmade with the ancient, and the untamed, Carol. Beautiful poem!
Mays Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thank you. Yes, you nailed it. That's exactly what I was trying to do.
Michael Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 5:11 AM
Lovely Carol...Most likely YOU were there before, before...
Mays Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 12:20 PM
Thank you. One can dream.
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