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A Secret Garden

Cascading out past an open window notes played so elegantly gain life Along side the cherry blossoms the fresh scent of honeysuckle glides to a special secret spot Unknown to human touch but loved by her so much 'tis where her feelings go where her sunshine grows in every breeze that passes by creating that twinkle in her eye A secluded sanctum with golden views warm hearts wander a quiet rendezvous

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Emile Pinet

Date: 4/12/2017 9:51:00 AM

Well done, harmony mixed with tranquillity has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page. Emile.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/12/2017 9:49:00 AM

Awwwwww....some poems just evoke this kind of emotion. Beautiful in every way

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/12/2017 9:28:00 AM

Tim, I love the musicality that puts us under a spell in this lovely poem where love and nature are intertwined:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 5:23:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. Whether love of two special people or love of nature and of her beauty both are marvelously expressed. I love it when both are combined and the reader can take either side. And yes either side can warm a heart. You wrote poetically beautiful. Well done entirely including the title.

Darren White

Date: 4/12/2017 3:41:00 AM

This poem can be read in so many ways, one is nature only, one is sensual only, but I see the combination of both in it.... and it is lovely!

Sara Ella

Date: 4/12/2017 2:06:00 AM

The special secret place - a wonderful place you have created, my friend :)

Carl Fraser

Date: 4/12/2017 1:46:00 AM

You have portrayed that secret spot so precisely Tim. Great write. Magical. Carl

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/11/2017 9:47:00 PM

So smooth, Tim. : ) Nature breathing in and out. Let those honeysuckle vines climb!

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/11/2017 7:04:00 PM

Its picturesque.you are at your best when writing about nature. I love your work.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2017 6:51:00 PM

oh how wonderful , a secret garden.Is it your ode to flowers as well, Tim? I posted the pic of my rose bushes just now. It took me forever to figure out how to get that particular picture from the file where I had it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/11/2017 5:57:00 PM

Very beautiful, really liked the last line!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2017 3:07:00 PM

I love both the honeysuckle and adore the cherry blossom..I have a soft spot for Japanese connections even their plants. I love the title..The Secret Garden..is somehow intriguing..and like a little girl makes me wanna enter that door to that fantasy land..that lives only in mymind. I am in love with your poem.You are on a roll..WoW..A fave.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/11/2017 3:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Charma...it sparked off a comment I made on Andrea's poem about a secret garden : )