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A Second Helping

Of the dark, offered in the morning cup,
and the chill of salted caramel cream,
spooning after an impervious dream
and clink-clink spell of alarum abrupt,
comes the ceramic to sip, birdsong up.
Fruity-caffeine drips into the bloodstream.
Imagery from a black forest daydream.
Pleasing sense and bonny sounds come to sup.
Draining of dregs, at last bit - bottom’s cold.
The Cupid sheet, vanilla, clings to spouse.
The warmth of my body under his skin.
The vigor of unharnessed dark horse bold.
His stirring, a second helping,  aroused.
Pastels of cockcrow flutes, dawn’s violins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Love your write and picture. Have a blessed day......................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Paula!
La France Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderful poem _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Mitra Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 1:26 AM
This is a beautiful poem Kim...Congrats on your win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Carol!
Edmonds  Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations on the win with this beautiful Italian sonnet Kim, delightful morning offerings... Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:10 AM
So blissful to imagine a second helping through your pen--daydreams in every sip my friend---especially as you evoke flutes and violins. A lovely romantic write, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much! xx
Kannan Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Beautiful Italian Sonnet and loved the flow... Wonderful write and thanks for sharing...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Thank you! May your day be blessed from sunrise to sunset!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 10:53 PM
It's not often one sees an Italian sonnet. But a worthy one. Bet the second helping was like nectar :) ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:15 AM
Thank you, dear Victor!
Lindley Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:45 PM
So purely and truly an exquisitely composed sonnet! Rhythm, rhyme imagery and flow are all absolutely tops. A gem and a definite fav for me. God bless, a wonderful gift to have read..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:14 AM
Robert, so honored that you read and such a lovely compliment. Thank you!
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