A Second Chance

I am making all things new, to those who believe- a promise trustworthy and true Inspired by Rev 21:5

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Sean Kelly

Date: 7/2/2009 1:58:00 AM

Yes , Brian , we also have a second chance to get it right on Lisbon AGAIN !!! We'll keep voting , until we do . It reminds me of the story of the Irish guy who was asked , why he always wore 2 condoms ? He said " Aye , to be sure , to be sure " ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 10:51:00 PM

This is a wonderful way to approach life, Brian. It's sometimes hard to obtain a "second chance," but surely everyone deserves one. Nice fibonacci! Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian

Date: 6/28/2009 3:00:00 AM

Amen a powerful write so full of truth, God bless you from diane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:56:00 PM

I just want to be there ... and you are the prophet and poet here ... thanks for all the great things you do. I took 2 weeks away, and many short breaks are in the plan, but always I shall return ... until the new world comes. One love.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2009 1:14:00 PM

A most uplifting, and hopeful poem, Brian. Thank you for that! :) Best wishes, Carrie