A Seashell To Remember

As the mercury soared above ninety degrees
    We piled in the car and headed to the sea
 It was dad, mom,  sister and me
    My sister was twelve, I was four years past three

 Once on the beach we roamed around
     I found a spot to build  a  sandcastle 
 Sis was talking,  a boy she had found
     And I with the sand, continued to "wrassle"

 After a while I got bored
     So I headed towards the water
 I felt the waves lick my feet
     And I ventured further to escape the heat
 Suddenly, a big wave lifted me
   And carried me out to sea
   
Back on shore, my sister was searching for me
   At the top of her voice she shouted out my name
 Her panic set in as she looked to see
     If the mighty  sea had claimed me

 As her tears started to pour
    Another wave brought me back to shore
After she saw me she dried  her tears
     And told me  never again to venture out there
 "Don't tell mom and dad,"  she made me swear
     And then she gave me a seashell,  it was my souvenir!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:04 AM
I see your souvenir did rather well in helping you to a top spot Joseph, congratulations..'
Sanchi Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:22 AM
Congrats for your win..very well potrayed with beautiful expressions of words...keep it up
A   Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 10:18 AM
a wonderful win.....skat
Mandani Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 9:08 AM
This is pretty nice. I like it very much. Congrats.
Relish Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Thats scary.. n a well written poem... congrats.. nad
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Joseph! Amazing story nicely done! Sandra
Callus Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 1:00 PM
What an experience, Joseph! I hope you kept that seashell! Congratulations on your top win. // paul
Zerbst Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Quite the experience here! There are not many poems where I seem to forget all about rhyme and structure because the story is so riveting. Also, I fancy that when a poem's structure is as it should be it blends with the poem in such a way as to be only slightly noticeable.
May Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Thank you for my #1 placement Isaiah
Konos Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Very touching....thank you and Congratulations...
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 4:04 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one again, Joseph. Get up a new one!! Pretty please.
Ryerson Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 3:25 PM
VERY well written and nostalgic piece here Joseph...I must have been a Dolphin or an Octopus in a previous life because I can't get enough of the ocean. I once had a similar experience to yours when I was a youngster but it was on one of those blow-up rafts...
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 3:44 PM
I found this quite emotional to read - i nearly drowned when i was about 6 - swimming pool not sea but it brought back memories:-( good luck n the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
May Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:29 PM
It is a very scary experience Jan...hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 3:43 PM
wow, what a memory, Joseph. I really enjoyed reading of your harrowing experience.
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 2:56 PM
- Always be careful, a lot of effort in the waves - A "memory" for life, superbly written Joseph ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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